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To Silent Storm |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
Upon my panting lips the tremble of this want My breath and all my senses blend together A deep wine red to flush my veins of frantic brought My soul escapes into your eyes a winsome feather Beyond me, you become my fullest captivation Every searching now defined in concentrated swell A point of flash, this jubilant and wanton celebration My light to yours erupts to fire these feelings quell Into my heart you enter on a welcome intimate To wrap of me in moonlight covers warm For now the distant drums succumb in spent content Upon my lips impassioned soft, to silent storm Copyright Kkh 6/10/02 [This message has been edited by ThisDiamond (06-10-2002 10:54 PM).] |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Absolutely beautiful Kathleen! Loved it so much! ~Hugs~ ~Somewhere in my heart I'm always |
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the_loner_23 Member Ascendant
since 2002-06-08
Posts 5479Jacksonville, Florida, USA |
Beautiful....Just beautiful I wish I could write this good. Cold hands means a warm heart |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Kathy, I always enjoy your message in your poems.. and you make each line flow with very good cadence and rhyme...which add to the poem immeasurably... |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
ThisDiamond Passionate and beautiful, portrayed with grace and eloquence. |
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devina Member Elite
since 1999-10-28
Posts 3539Cali |
You've set this one up nicely!!! I love the whole feel of it!! *intimate to be sure!!* Open arms can be the most fragile in the world... |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
yes. . . I like this. . . it's different. . . soft and delicate. . . well done. . . ------------------------------------------------------- To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world. |
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Balladeer
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
Yowsa! The receiptient of this is one lucky fella! A beautiful touch of desire and wanting in this one, diamond lady  |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Whew! |
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Madame Chipmunk Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-05
Posts 8296Michigan |
A gorgeous write, Kathleen... I especially loved the last verse  ~ loving hugsLyra |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
Beyond me, you become my fullest captivation such a perfect line..*s loved it M |
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ecrivan Member Elite
since 2001-12-10
Posts 3923my own state |
Bold yet graceful, that is true |
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