Open Poetry #21 |
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Lover's Sway |
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Magnus![]() ![]()
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA ![]() |
Night in fall still of air resting the leaves A squeal, soft sigh stroking the ear in tumble as a kiss lingers in taste Dancing to the lighted tail of distant wings as fireflies serenade ‘neath the smile of moon into the ignite of dawn in sway lover’s sway... Til blood of veins flows in the torrent of a passionate river into the winding gorge of taste in feel... [This message has been edited by Magnus (06-20-2002 07:52 PM).] |
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rwood Member Elite
since 2000-02-29
Posts 3793Tennessee |
as fireflies serenade ‘neath the smile of moon into the ignite of dawn in sway lover’s sway... Til blood of veins flows in the torrent of a passionate river into the winding gorge of taste in feel... Oh...gosh..am I first?..can I kick start the howl moon up and lead the choir? Goodness mercy..and greatness.. Sincerely, Reg |
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Magnus![]() ![]()
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Reg...You do know how to put a smile on a man's face....Thank You!!!!!! |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Magnus, I think we opened pandoras box in you. |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
YES!! YES!! YES!! OH MY!! How I *SIGH* Of course you know I love this...don't you? *It was on the questionaire was it not?* ![]() ~Hugs You~ ~Somewhere in my heart I'm always |
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Magnus![]() ![]()
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
A poet's quill within the box of Pandora's mind and soul The magic touch upon the locks shall bring to words in roll OH YES WE HAVE...haven't we.. Thanx Sy...and BTW...No, I never knew I had all of this within me a year ago....Not a clue.... I am still coming out, so to speak... Katie...bar the door, here comes Magnus! OH MY, OH MY, OHHHH MY!!!! Nancy...what has happened to you tonite.... Have we brought out the inner soul of you upon the pages blue??? Thy soul is mine M'lady to bring forth a sigh to take to the stream 'pon yon mount of high To let the taste of kiss be left upon thy lips to covet, bring to bliss as heart now jumps, now skips |
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catalinamoon![]()
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
Well, I think it has all been said. But I agree, this is wonderful. I'm sure glad you decided to share your poetry with us. Sandra |
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Magnus![]() ![]()
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Sandra....you are welcome....and thanx should go to Karen (Startime)...for she pointed me toward PiP..... |
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Martie
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since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Barry You got rhythm! |
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Magnus![]() ![]()
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Martie....I do? Well, I hope that is a good thing....Hope you enjoyed this... Thanx.. |
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Martie
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since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Barry...Yes, it's a good thing and I did enjoy...silly! |
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Magnus![]() ![]()
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Martie....sorta like .... you got rhythm, you got music....you got (what was the next one).... Yes, I can be silly...I have been called that before.... |
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Mistletoe Angel![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
![]() ![]() ![]() (smiles) YAY!!! WOW, I LOVE THIS!!! This reminded me of Dark Stranger's usual style, sweet friend, I love the diverse approaches to all your fabulous poems always! (big hugggssssss) This is excellent, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Barry, thank you for sharing! ![]() May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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Marge Tindal![]() ![]() ![]() ![]()
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Magnus~ There is something VERY nice about this write from you .... EVERYTHING ! 'the ignite of dawn in sway' What a gorgeous thought ...~ *Hugs* ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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Magnus![]() ![]()
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Noah....thanx my friend, I guess the fires haven't burned up your phone and cable lines yet...A good thing.... Praying you remain safe... Marge, You put a really really BIG smile on my face when you write such awesome remarks....I do enjoy seeing others smile from my penning. |
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Madame Chipmunk Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-05
Posts 8296Michigan |
A squeal, soft sigh stroking the ear in tumble as a kiss lingers in taste lovely words here, Barry... ![]() Lyra |
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devina Member Elite
since 1999-10-28
Posts 3539Cali |
Oohhh...gracing Open with your romantic spell as well I see... ![]() simply magnificent sir!!! Open arms can be the most fragile in the world... |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
magnus, this is magnum big bore cool..enjoyed it sir |
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Marsha![]()
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
Magnus darling heart this is outstandingly written. Never ever do you write anything less that perfection, and of course this is another example of your soul’s special sigh. Your writing wafts over my spirit like a zephyr of delight, your writing drifts through the places, which breathe in wondrous joy at the sight of your work Yet again you fill me with awe whatever you write, it has a charm and a magic that contains so much truth. As always darling boy you excel as only you can. I love it utterly utterly utterly As always Mushy ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() Breathe through the heat of our desire |
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Sunshine
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since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
With the exception of not being first, I will allow what Regina said to stand for my thoughts... let the howl begin... |
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Magnus![]() ![]()
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Into the darkness of minds day as lover's waltz in sway into the streams of lost reside where passions flow on wings of clear in waters cooled by the breeze of you.... Good Morning Passions.... |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
Magnus....After reading all that I'll just have to say ...Well Done! |
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