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Magnus

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since 2001-10-10

Posts 14135
South Carolina, USA

0 posted 2002-06-20 07:34 PM

Night in fall

still of air resting the leaves

A squeal, soft sigh stroking the ear
in tumble
as a kiss
lingers in taste

Dancing to the lighted tail
of distant wings
as fireflies serenade
‘neath the smile of moon
into the ignite of dawn in sway
lover’s sway...
Til blood of veins flows
in the torrent of a passionate river
               into the winding gorge
                        of taste
                           in feel...

[This message has been edited by Magnus (06-20-2002 07:52 PM).]

rwood
Member Elite

since 2000-02-29

Posts 3793
Tennessee

1 posted 2002-06-20 08:07 PM

as fireflies serenade
‘neath the smile of moon
into the ignite of dawn in sway
lover’s sway...
Til blood of veins flows
in the torrent of a passionate river
               into the winding gorge
                        of taste
                           in feel...

Oh...gosh..am I first?..can I kick start the howl moon up and lead the choir?

Goodness mercy..and greatness..

Sincerely,
Reg

Magnus

Member Laureate

since 2001-10-10

Posts 14135
South Carolina, USA

2 posted 2002-06-20 08:09 PM

Reg...You do know how to put a smile on
a man's face....Thank You!!!!!!

Seymour Tabin
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since 1999-07-07

Posts 31720
Tamarac Fla

3 posted 2002-06-20 08:10 PM

Magnus,
I think we opened pandoras box in you.

Enchantress
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since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

4 posted 2002-06-20 08:11 PM

YES!! YES!! YES!!
OH MY!! How I *SIGH*
Of course you know I love this...don't you?
*It was on the questionaire was it not?*

~Hugs You~

~Somewhere in my heart I'm always
dancing with you in the summer rain~

Magnus

Member Laureate

since 2001-10-10

Posts 14135
South Carolina, USA

5 posted 2002-06-20 08:23 PM

A poet's quill within the box
of Pandora's mind and soul
The magic touch upon the locks
shall bring to words in roll

OH YES WE HAVE...haven't we..

Thanx Sy...and BTW...No,  I never knew I had
all of this within me a year ago....Not
a clue....  I am still coming out, so to
speak...  Katie...bar the door,  here comes
Magnus!
OH MY, OH MY, OHHHH MY!!!!  Nancy...what has
happened to you tonite....  Have we brought
out the inner soul of you upon the pages
blue???

Thy soul is mine M'lady
to bring forth a sigh
to take to the stream
'pon yon mount of high

To let the taste of kiss
be left upon thy lips
to covet, bring to bliss
as heart now jumps, now skips

catalinamoon

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-06-03

Posts 9543
The Shores of Alone

6 posted 2002-06-20 08:44 PM

Well, I think it has all been said. But I agree, this is wonderful. I'm sure glad you decided to share your poetry with us.
Sandra

Magnus

Member Laureate

since 2001-10-10

Posts 14135
South Carolina, USA

7 posted 2002-06-20 08:53 PM

Sandra....you are welcome....and thanx should
go to Karen (Startime)...for she pointed me
toward PiP.....

Martie

Moderator

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since 1999-09-21

Posts 28049
California

8 posted 2002-06-20 08:58 PM

Barry

You got rhythm!

Magnus

Member Laureate

since 2001-10-10

Posts 14135
South Carolina, USA

9 posted 2002-06-20 09:00 PM

Martie....I do? Well, I hope that is a
good thing....Hope you enjoyed this...
Thanx..

Martie

Moderator

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since 1999-09-21

Posts 28049
California

10 posted 2002-06-20 09:12 PM

Barry...Yes, it's a good thing and I did enjoy...silly!

Magnus

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since 2001-10-10

Posts 14135
South Carolina, USA

11 posted 2002-06-20 09:14 PM

Martie....sorta like .... you got rhythm,
you got music....you got (what was the next
one).... Yes, I can be silly...I have been
called that before....

Mistletoe Angel

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since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

12 posted 2002-06-20 09:15 PM

(smiles) YAY!!! WOW, I LOVE THIS!!! This reminded me of Dark Stranger's usual style, sweet friend, I love the diverse approaches to all your fabulous poems always! (big hugggssssss) This is excellent, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Barry, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

Marge Tindal

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since 1999-11-06

Posts 42384
Florida's Foreverly Shores

13 posted 2002-06-20 09:22 PM

Magnus~
There is something VERY nice about this write from you .... EVERYTHING !

'the ignite of dawn in sway'

What a gorgeous thought ...~
*Hugs*
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
[email protected]

Magnus

Member Laureate

since 2001-10-10

Posts 14135
South Carolina, USA

14 posted 2002-06-20 09:27 PM

Noah....thanx my friend,  I guess the fires
haven't burned up your phone and cable lines
yet...A good thing....  Praying you remain
safe...

Marge,

You put a really really BIG smile on my face
when you write such awesome remarks....I do
enjoy seeing others smile from my penning.

Madame Chipmunk
Member Rara Avis

since 2001-12-05

Posts 8296
Michigan

15 posted 2002-06-20 11:49 PM

A squeal, soft sigh stroking the ear
in tumble
as a kiss
lingers in taste

lovely words here, Barry...

~ hugs of firefly wings

Lyra

copyright2002 Lyra Nesius

"poetry is life distilled" Gwendolyn Brooks

devina
Member Elite

since 1999-10-28

Posts 3539
Cali

16 posted 2002-06-21 01:03 AM

Oohhh...gracing Open with your romantic spell as well I see...

simply magnificent sir!!!

Open arms can be the most fragile in the world...

Dark Stranger
Member Patricius

since 2001-03-19

Posts 13631
West Coast

17 posted 2002-06-21 08:25 AM

magnus, this is magnum big bore cool..enjoyed it sir

Marsha

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-07-10

Posts 7423
Maidstone Kent England

18 posted 2002-06-21 09:00 AM

Magnus darling heart this is outstandingly written. Never ever do you write anything less that perfection, and of course this is another example of your soul’s special sigh. Your writing wafts over my spirit like a zephyr of delight, your writing drifts through the places, which breathe in wondrous joy at the sight of your work

Yet again you fill me with awe whatever you write, it has a charm and a magic that contains so much truth. As always darling boy you excel as only you can. I love it utterly utterly utterly

Love and warm stuff
As always
Mushy

Breathe through the heat of our desire
Thy coolness and they balm
Let sense be dumb let flesh retire
Speak through the eathquake wind and fire
Oh

Sunshine

Administrator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

19 posted 2002-06-21 09:43 AM

With the exception of not being first, I will allow what Regina said to stand for my thoughts...

let the howl begin...

Magnus

Member Laureate

since 2001-10-10

Posts 14135
South Carolina, USA

20 posted 2002-06-21 09:49 AM

Into the darkness of minds day
as lover's waltz in sway
into the streams of lost reside
where passions flow on wings
of clear in waters cooled
by the breeze of you....

Good Morning Passions....

ethome
Member Patricius

since 2000-05-14

Posts 11858
New Brunswick Canada

21 posted 2002-06-23 05:03 AM

Magnus....After reading all that I'll just have to say ...Well Done!

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