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Taste of Linger Twenty or less....
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Taste of Linger Twenty or less.... |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA 
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Lips taste lingering as fire grows expanding trace charting unknown as a glowing blush of red flows |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
Perfect 20 or less  Sandra |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Thanx Sandra...I thought I would give all of you a light snack before the main course... Hugs dear lady.. |
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rwood Member Elite
since 2000-02-29
Posts 3793Tennessee |
I have a really big appetite but not near as poetic as yours..you are on a roll..croissant maybe?~hug you smiles. Sincerely, Reg |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Dang!!! Barry!!! OHMYGOSH! YES!! ~Somewhere in my heart I'm always |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
A novel of passion in 20 or less is ALWAYS a good sign. Very nicely done indeed and very impactful in the phrasing you chose. |
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RosePetal
since 2001-08-26
Posts 2985South Florida |
you say sooo much good stuff in your 20 or less. i'm in awe of u my friend |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
I'd like one of those, please... or several. *G* Excellent work! |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
Magnus, this was lip smacking good BTW thank you so much for your words of praise. Keth. Here in the midst of my lonely abyss, a single joy I find...your presence in my mind. Unknown |
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Lady In White
since 2001-02-12
Posts 2799USA |
Oh...very very good... |
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Pilgrimage Member Elite
since 2001-12-04
Posts 3945Texas, USA |
Mmmmm... Do it again. Nan |
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Zinsser Senior Member
since 2001-02-27
Posts 1641Calif. |
very nice... : ) ~~ Connie ~~ |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
OK, I will do it again... Grapes rolled 'tween lips eye's trance taste of vine's tips first glance smiling eyes know |
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1slick_lady Member Ascendant
since 2000-12-22
Posts 6088standing on a shadow's lace |
this is just beautiful...helen |
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Madame Chipmunk Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-05
Posts 8296Michigan |
Very excellent, Barry....  ~ lots of hugsLyra |
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Duncan Member Ascendant
since 2001-08-07
Posts 5455 |
Now this is a moment distilled! Excellent, Barry. Forgetting all I'm lacking |
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devina Member Elite
since 1999-10-28
Posts 3539Cali |
Always wondered what "linger" tasted like!! *EG *how did I know that YOU would know??!!*  Open arms can be the most fragile in the world... |
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Suetang Member Ascendant
since 2001-03-07
Posts 5187Melbourne, Australia |
Hello Barry This one really warmed my heart. Take care.....Sue Suetang |
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Goodknight Member Elite
since 2002-06-15
Posts 2386Ohio, USA |
very well done Barry - Paul |
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SmartChick Member Rara Avis
since 2001-09-23
Posts 7081On A Journey To The Unknown |
Wow Magnus! This is great. |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
Magnus darling boy I pronounce you keeper of the nights magic this is utterly perfect the simplicity the elegance and the grace this is written with is perfectly delicious. You are utterly utterly perfect when it comes to insight and wisdom, when you stir into the mix your incredibly gifted pen I know it’s going to be special and I love it utterly but you knew that didn’t you. Wonderful writing as always. This has lines that are spun with dreams light into a cloth of wonder, it lays over the soul like a drift of lacy delight. A wonderful truly exceptional piece of writing. Yes I love it, I love it utterly utterly.   Love and warm stuff As always Mushy  Breathe through the heat of our desire |
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