Open Poetry #21 |
The tired sky |
bsquirrel
since 2000-01-03
Posts 7855 |
The tired sky, so tired I cannot compose these colors to make a movement swirl. Cannot see the shadows that the shade trees bring. Cannot find the street of soft lines to your door. Cannot feel the warm night in this blistered heat. Cannot find the time to sleep. Cannot find the time to keep. The tired sky, so tired I find this night in solace. Lay along the breezy crease. She said burn ... together. -TON [This message has been edited by bsquirrel (06-19-2002 05:19 PM).] |
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the_loner_23 Member Ascendant
since 2002-06-08
Posts 5479Jacksonville, Florida, USA |
2 thumbs up I like Cold hands means a warm heart |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
Very nice once again MIke.....sweltering lines with a peaceful resolve!! |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
This almost made me tired. Well done. Sandra |
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bsquirrel
since 2000-01-03
Posts 7855 |
Glad y' enjoyed. And Sandra, that made me smile. She said burn ... together. |
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