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Soleil Noir Senior Member
since 2001-12-19
Posts 688USA |
for you I will walk a long legged walk that short skirts allow and heels imply when flick of hip swings cross your mind for you know that I would seriously study paperwork as I stood near accidently brushing thoughts with pointed interest for you know that a V'd neckline would plunge by bend alone and what, you say, you are helpless at your desk? for you I would make sure the blinds would be pulled closed, slowly assuring the lock on your door works for you I wear vanilla musk warmly shallow breath would lead to deeper breaths that you might appreciate cotton properties stretching across boundaries where there is no sign saying trespassers beware for you the sign says welcome home [This message has been edited by Soleil Noir (06-19-2002 10:59 AM).] |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Soleil Noir Well know, that is a welcome home. Enjoyed |
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haydenjames Member
since 2002-02-14
Posts 164Antigua & Barbuda |
Great write. My poetry is at: http://www.thehayden.org |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
my office has signs posted right outside the barbed wire that reads in flashing neon "herds of hungry bad dogs" yours sounds much more pleasent ms enjoyed it |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Soleil..DANG!! This is SO Good! *My eyes just turned a darker shade of green!* IWIWHWT!! ~Hugs~ |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
My, oh my, oh my, oh my...... Buh buh buh buh buhhhhhhhh h h !!!!! |
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Pilgrimage Member Elite
since 2001-12-04
Posts 3945Texas, USA |
Golly! Gee! Not the kinds of signs at this office at all.  Nan |
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bsquirrel
since 2000-01-03
Posts 7855 |
Can I work at your office, Black Sun? She said burn ... together. |
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Bridget Shenachie Senior Member
since 2002-01-23
Posts 1056Kansas USA |
That does it! I'm putting in for a transfer to anywhere but here. Enjoyed your poem! Shenachie |
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Mystic Mystron Member
since 2002-02-15
Posts 69North York .Ontario |
great poem... loved the images!!! [This message has been edited by Mystic Mystron (06-20-2002 01:23 AM).] |
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Magicmystery Senior Member
since 2002-02-13
Posts 821Windsor, Ontario, Canada |
"shallow breath would lead to deeper breaths that you might appreciate cotton properties stretching across boundaries where there is no sign saying trespassers beware" ROFLMAO I loved it... and you drop hints like -a- bombs here.... He must be a real head turner.... risking the office romance like that..... oOOPs have I said too much? {still laughing} I cannot tell you enough how much I loved this poem. It is bound for my collection!!!! well done. Sherry P.S. Check out this "Welcome Home" Cherish the good memories past and look forward to the adventure called Tomorrow. But above all... be kind to yourself today. [This message has been edited by Magicmystery (06-20-2002 01:35 AM).] |
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Duncan Member Ascendant
since 2001-08-07
Posts 5455 |
The title caught my eye, the poem made me smile. Not a bad office to work in!! Forgetting all I'm lacking |
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Madame Chipmunk Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-05
Posts 8296Michigan |
Soleil...This is an unbelievable poem... I love the raw sensuality covered with the mundane office setting... and the way you used those words.... so deep...so raw...so lovely  ~ hugs from another officeLyra |
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