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Still Missing Him
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Still Missing Him |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone 
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I miss him when I wake up every morn I miss him as I sleep each night forlorn the absence never feels alright to me this life without him denies fantasy. I miss him as I put my lipstick on no one to kiss at end of day so long I miss him as I dress in lacy things although he'll never see what I would bring. I miss him, will I never see his face? I miss him, love that time cannot erase. How to bear knowing that it's really true and there is simply nothing I can do. A vacancy where there should be a home I miss him, every day I feel alone Amnesia now would seem the kindest way forgetfulness of he who would not stay. I miss him but it's all a hopeless case a love of ages come to naught but waste. |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
to miss is to be woman to dream is to be man lovers dream of missing there is a he there dreaming enjoyed your art ms |
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SmartChick Member Rara Avis
since 2001-09-23
Posts 7081On A Journey To The Unknown |
This is so sad, Sandra! I know how it is to be so lonely. |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
catalinamoon Sad, but well done. |
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ctowen Member Elite
since 2001-10-18
Posts 2286Green Mountains of VT |
This may seem hopeless, I agree .... but a waste? ... never ... these are lessons well earned, sad but true. To miss this much is to have truly loved ... To have this much is to be truly loved in return. |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
missing always seems like waiting. . . doesn't it??? you know that I like the words. . . even when they're sad. . . ----------------------------------------------------------- To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world. |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Sandra..M'lady....you has the stuff, and it's enuff...so sit back a bit....keep the fire blazing...the candle lit...and you will. I know it... |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
This is heartbreak work Sandra......The loss is well expressed in these concise lines.....A very enjoyable read! |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (BIG HUGGSSSSSSSS) Oh Sandra, know that we all do know how you feel and care so very much, everything will turn out in the end and I know soon you will find a true love your heart will have forever then this pain will be gone because the amnesia of love overcomes all! (kiss on cheek) This is heartachingly beautiful, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Sandra, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
You know that I still find myself missing women that were in my life over ten years ago...but the desire and pain diminish as the years pass. Sometimes by accepting basic truths we are able to let go... Such as have they gone on with their lives... Have they found someone new... Do they still call us or think of us... Obviously it takes two people for any relationship to work... And it is impossible to hold onto someone that wants to go on with their life...James |
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bsquirrel
since 2000-01-03
Posts 7855 |
Beautifully sad. I loved this, Sandra. She said burn ... together. |
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Madame Chipmunk Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-05
Posts 8296Michigan |
Sandra...this is a lovely, but very sad poem... If you didn't miss him, your life might be less painful, but its that pain that makes you a deeper person....and such a wonderful poet, ~ my hugs cry for youLyra |
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Suetang Member Ascendant
since 2001-03-07
Posts 5187Melbourne, Australia |
Hello Sandra This was so beautiful yet so very sad. I could almost feel you pain and I hope love adorns your heart before too long. Take care.......Sue Suetang |
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wranx Member Elite
since 2002-06-07
Posts 3689Moved from a shack to a barn |
A lovely write A lovely sad write A lovely, sad A lovely, sad, writes of hurtsweet and nightlonging Ms Sandra, I do like the way that you write. ~wranx What? You don't like pizza? "Writing is a perfectly natural thing to do....just remember to wash your hands afterward"....Heinlein. |
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Balladeer
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
This one wrenches, Sandra...beuatifully sad work  |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
This is heart-wrenching, painful... and excellent. *S* |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
enjoyed  |
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