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Magicmystery
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since 2002-02-13
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Windsor, Ontario, Canada

0 posted 2002-06-19 12:36 PM



Evening Falls midifile

Else

Why do I search here,
In the darkness of time gone?
It was just a small breeze,
That whistled through my heart,
But it threatened to extinguish,
The force that drives me on.

Why do I linger here,
Where the air is void and raw?
Wandering aimlessly the night,
Hoping for a far off light,
The same one I once saw,
The inspiration for my flight.

Tell me it is too late.
Say the voice inside is gone.
It will never be the same again,
And I will never win,
Yet I fight on and on in hope,
And sing aloud my song.

Is it worth it to remain,
A little while longer here?
I’ll never stray too far away.
I’m held here by my fear.
Or is it only laziness,
That keeps me prisoner here?

Sherry Gardner


Cherish the good memories past and look forward to the adventure called Tomorrow.
But above all... be kind to yourself today.


[This message has been edited by Magicmystery (06-19-2002 12:40 AM).]

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1 posted 2002-06-19 12:48 PM




BRAVO!!! Yes, I love this thought-provoking second installment, and i especially love the quote you added to the end of it, we must not always frustrate ourselves what could have been or continue to worry about the future, but especially give ourselves a hug! (sigh) I can't wait to read the last part now sweet friend, this is wonderful, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Sherry, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

ethome
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New Brunswick Canada
2 posted 2002-06-19 04:53 AM


Well Sherry....You certainly don't have a lazy pen!

Nicely done.....good questions!

Enchantress
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since 2001-08-14
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Canada eh.
3 posted 2002-06-19 09:07 AM


Yes...why is it we stay when it is obvious
nothing remains for us....thought provoking.
Well done!
~hugs~

alterego
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since 2002-02-23
Posts 113
Toronto, Ontario, Canada
4 posted 2002-06-19 12:26 PM


A nice read.
Up, Up and Away!!!

Love

Mom

Create something infinite today - Smile!!!

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