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call me home... |
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devina Member Elite
since 1999-10-28
Posts 3539Cali 
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Pain so raw so cumbersome Addiction-sweet like opium… Never-ending sight to see Ever reigning weak of me… A hazy diamond linked to stone Crazy distance call me home just ~call me home… Open arms can be the most fragile in the world... |
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wayoutwalt Member Elite
since 1999-06-22
Posts 4870TEXAS (it's all big) |
oh devina suprema i love this here write |
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the_loner_23 Member Ascendant
since 2002-06-08
Posts 5479Jacksonville, Florida, USA |
very good poem Cold hands means a warm heart |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (big hugggsssssss) Oh Tanya, this is so sadly touching, sweet friend, I wish for true love to come to your heart and always welcome you with comfort, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Tanya, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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my3monkeytoes Member
since 2002-05-11
Posts 152In the Carolina Breeze |
"ever reigning weak of me" I love this! Your word choices flow so well, Devina. Excellent expression! ~Sydney McLean |
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MIdsummerRain Member
since 2002-05-19
Posts 175St. Louis, Missouri |
"...Pain so raw so cumbersome Addiction-sweet like opium..." What profound words you have given us here; Beautifuly written! [b]~Rayne[/i] For in much wisdom is much grief |
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ambermize Member
since 2001-04-21
Posts 157California |
Tanya???...Tanya????? Im callin ya sissy.....uhm I'm on my way...see you in about what?...two maybe three days??.... Love you. Kiss MY ciaya.... |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
These first few lines really hit me between the eyes and set the finale up so well! "Pain so raw so cumbersome Addiction-sweet like opium…" |
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tracie66 Member Elite
since 2000-01-18
Posts 4713Australia |
 great poem, well penned Devina, I enjoyed very much ~HUGS~ Love is the life of the soul... |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
ok home. . . you know where you are. . .  love it. . . ---------------------------------------------------------- To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world. |
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bsquirrel
since 2000-01-03
Posts 7855 |
Love yr writing. Especially in the mood I'm in (not bad, just questioning), this really hits home. Glad y' wrote i'! She said burn ... together. |
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devina Member Elite
since 1999-10-28
Posts 3539Cali |
Walter- soooo good to see you my friend... tl23-ty much sweetie, enjoy you as well... MA- oh no dear, thank you for the concern, but I am happily committed!!! Don't think I'll ever let go of the darker side of poetry though...ty Sydney- glad you enjoyed poetess... Raybe- thank you for the beautiful... Ambs- I said call ME home sis...but I'd much rather you make the two hour drive!!! *EG Love you~ Tanya ethome- glad I set it up so good!!! my thanks!! tracie- if you enjoyed, then my job is done.... John- it was a long time comin huh?  we've been through alot, you and I...ty sweetsMike- questioning huh?? Oh I have plenty of THOSE poems...he he Glad to be of service cute sir... Open arms can be the most fragile in the world... |
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RSEvans Senior Member
since 1999-10-23
Posts 1147Tulsa, OK, USA |
Wow...short but powerful. okay so...Come home to me? |
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Suetang Member Ascendant
since 2001-03-07
Posts 5187Melbourne, Australia |
Hello Devina Great writing from your talented pen. Take care.....Sue Suetang |
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devina Member Elite
since 1999-10-28
Posts 3539Cali |
Rob- you are *bad*...thank you... Sue- the muse is high and the pen is willing...*giggles* ty lady!! Open arms can be the most fragile in the world... |
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BrandeeM Junior Member
since 2002-05-01
Posts 45 |
just thought of opium in wanting... you've drained your pen this time for sure!!! *amazing poetess* |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
enjoyed |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Glad you are not feeling this....but you write it soooo well.... |
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