Open Poetry #21 |
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Life Has Just Begun |
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EarthenSoul Member
since 2002-05-30
Posts 163WA, USA |
Feel the Earth spinning 'Round and round the Sun The Winds are blowing Life has just begun Feel the Moon pulling Always at the Tide The laws of Nature Forever abide Time is infinite Toss aside the clock Listen to the Waves Crashing upon Rock Feel the energy Watch the Lightning burn And then the Thunder When it comes his turn The Earth keeps spinning 'Round and round the Sun The Moon keeps pulling Life has just begun [This message has been edited by EarthenSoul (06-10-2002 07:13 PM).] |
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Magnus![]() ![]()
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Trisha, this is very nice...love the flow of it...Yes, the earth is ever spinning and life has just begun... |
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LilTai Member
since 2002-06-08
Posts 189United States |
I like this a lot. Like Magnus said, it flows great. Nice job =) Tai |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
I have to agree with the previous replies....nice flow and good writing....spin away! |
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