Open Poetry #21 |
Somehow, It's Like This |
Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Do you remember them, Your friends of want, They held your hand When boys’ teasing and taunts Grew to be too much? They came with hugs, Advice and touch, And then gave heart tugs, But regardless of All of their cheer, Somehow, someway, A cat appears… Your friends showed concerned, When your heart was broke, And in little girl style You all sat and spoke; and Ponytails and shaggy bangs Were all part of this Little girls’ gang As somehow they helped Chase away your fears But though reason unknown, A cat appeared… It can be just like that, You know You might be given such A great blow Your friends then all rally round Your feeling of lost, Is once again found, For you’re not alone After all And just like that You stand tall When somehow, someway, A cat appears And in this little cat’s All-seeing eyes She took it in, and Quickly surmised That a purr or two, Or tears hid in fur Can make one feel A bit reassured The other girls knew And let the cat be For it circled complete Trusting harmony. Photography: K R Jungel [This message has been edited by Sunshine (06-19-2002 06:34 AM).] |
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the_loner_23 Member Ascendant
since 2002-06-08
Posts 5479Jacksonville, Florida, USA |
Anything about cat's I like. Cold hands means a warm heart |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
(smiles) Ooohhhhhhhh..I love kittens and cats so so much, ooohhhhhh...I just think they are one of the most adorable friends to us all and have emotions that are similar to ours! (sigh) Who says a black cat crossing in front of you means bad luck, I feel they only want you to see them to know how you feel and that they care! This is wonderful, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Karilea, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
I don't relate well to all of the closeness young friends have...but I sense it to be a very wonderful part of growing up. And the soothing ability of a cat...absorbing the pain, while giving and accepting love so freely... Thank you KJ...you are doing very well with your photog additions to your arsenal of poetry... |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
...I KNOW exactly what you mean... ~Love you hugs~ |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
Yes... it is. *S* There are times I don't think I would have survived... if not for my fur-covered life preservers. *S* |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Karilea Cats indeed know about such things. You brought me some sweet memories with this. |
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Madame Chipmunk Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-05
Posts 8296Michigan |
Cats are so comforting, Karilea... just stroking and petting a cat can actually lower your blood pressure... I miss mine terribly....but I don't think I want another one because the bad thing about pets is losing them. I love your poem and the photo... ~ kitty cat hugs Lyra |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
sure like those photos K and the poems that inspired them morning ms |
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LngJhnAg Member Elite
since 1999-07-23
Posts 3508Boot+Kitty=Poetry in motion |
And no sooner does a cat appear than, TA-DAAA, ol' Kitty Kicker comes to the rescue! Actually, I love this poem, Karilea. Not so much for the cat part, but the part about how girls can be so supportive and close. I guess I like the cat part, too. This is another keeper. |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
Kari darling heart sister this is utterly utterly perfect the ultimate depiction of girls and their closeness, how they comfort and collaborate to make you whole again. As for the cat most definitely it is the perfect addition to this delightful piece from you. I love it utterly utterly Love and warm stuff As always Mushy Breathe through the heat of our desire |
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