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Fill Up All My Senses
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Fill Up All My Senses |
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Suetang Member Ascendant
since 2001-03-07
Posts 5187Melbourne, Australia 
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Fill up all my senses With every aspect of love Send my spirit soaring To the heavens high above Have me at your mercy A slave to your desire Strike me like a match C'mon baby light my fire Fill me with your passion Lay your love at my feet Drink from love's chalice A nectar so smooth and sweet Stroke me by the firelight Beside the warming amber glow I love you deeper than any ocean Much more than you'll ever know Suetang [This message has been edited by Suetang (06-19-2002 12:17 AM).] |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
Sue This piece is saturated with a torrid sensuality........HOT! I can just tell....this Guy's not going to be able to walk for a week. They'll have to put crime scene tape around him...... Good write Sue very good! |
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Goodknight Member Elite
since 2002-06-15
Posts 2386Ohio, USA |
wow - almost to hot to touch - i will type more after I stop hyperventilating...what passion...I will go back to reading after the flush recedes. What a poem!!! thanks - Paul |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
How can I possibly say anything after what ET and Goodknight wrote...Sheeeesh! NOTHING I say can possibly come close... Yeeeouch! |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
  (smiles) Ooohhhhhhhh...this is indeed a very sensually beautiful poem, sweet friend, you indeed light a fire across these pages with this gem! (kiss on cheek) This is delightful, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Sue, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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the_loner_23 Member Ascendant
since 2002-06-08
Posts 5479Jacksonville, Florida, USA |
Whoa!!!!!!! Awesome poem here. Cold hands means a warm heart |
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Suetang Member Ascendant
since 2001-03-07
Posts 5187Melbourne, Australia |
Oops! I actually wondered whether I'd be allowed to post this here but I didn't think it was offensive in any way. I guess you have now seen firsthand a very sensual side of me and I'm glad you liked my words. Take care......Sue Suetang |
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NewEnglandlazurlu Member Rara Avis
since 2002-01-04
Posts 7470A Mountain Paradise |
You go girl! Hot, hot, hot! "...I love you deeper than the ocean..." that's saying something considering there's ocean all around where you live and it's mighty deep! Great write and something very different. Keep 'em flowing. Hugs, Marti " My wrinkles are badges of courage and reveal that I am a Mother." |
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Pilgrimage Member Elite
since 2001-12-04
Posts 3945Texas, USA |
I should have saved this one to read tonight. It's a bit warm for a morning read-but oh so nice. Nan |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
I think you like this guy...James |
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