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Magnus

Member Laureate

since 2001-10-10

Posts 14135
South Carolina, USA

0 posted 2002-06-18 05:44 PM

Softness of a pillow
against the firmness of warmth,
wafting the presence of you
beyond the slip of covers
from smoothness.

A road of waving locks winding
across sensual silk valleys.
A two lane road to a town
called “Last Night”.

Whispering pines serenading
the love made of finest champagne
bubbling, rising, sparkling
until drained.

The shadow of you
dancing softly against white
hypnotizing, mesmerizing
even now.

I wait again
til rise of moon, set of light.
Til ragged hot breath caresses my ear
again..whispering....
evermore...

Seymour Tabin
Member Empyrean

since 1999-07-07

Posts 31720
Tamarac Fla

1 posted 2002-06-18 05:53 PM

Magnus,
Very romantic. Something all the girls will love.

SmartChick
Member Rara Avis

since 2001-09-23

Posts 7081
On A Journey To The Unknown

2 posted 2002-06-18 05:57 PM

This is soooo romantic.

Goodknight
Member Elite

since 2002-06-15

Posts 2386
Ohio, USA

3 posted 2002-06-18 06:02 PM

nearly liquid romance - nicely done - Paul

Magnus

Member Laureate

since 2001-10-10

Posts 14135
South Carolina, USA

4 posted 2002-06-18 06:16 PM

Sy...thanx... Let's say that is the audience
that this is catering toward....At least I
do hope so...

Smart Chick...thank you bunches...glad you
enjoyed the write...

Paul...thanx for your remarks...pleased to
meet you..

Madame Chipmunk
Member Rara Avis

since 2001-12-05

Posts 8296
Michigan

5 posted 2002-06-18 07:34 PM

You are the bard of romance, Barry.

~ hugs evermore

Lyra

copyright2002 Lyra Nesius

"poetry is life distilled" Gwendolyn Brooks

Enchantress
Member Empyrean

since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

6 posted 2002-06-18 07:50 PM

*SIGH*

*Meet you on the shores of evermore...
I'll be wearing White Shoulders and saying..
"Barry, this is your Best EVER!"*

ethome
Member Patricius

since 2000-05-14

Posts 11858
New Brunswick Canada

7 posted 2002-06-18 07:56 PM

                 "Whispering pines serenading
                 the love made of finest champagne
                 bubbling, rising, sparkling
                 until drained.

                 The shadow of you
                 dancing softly against white
                 hypnotizing, mesmerizing
                 even now.

                 I wait again
                 til rise of moon, set of light.
                 Til ragged hot breath caresses my ear
                 again..whispering....
                 evermore..."

You hopeless, helpless old romantic you!
You're hooked on moonlight sugar and the rythum of heartdrop rain
and the vision of sunshine love!!
It's in there and it's got to come out........so you don't die inside by drowning in you own romanticism!

I know these things!

Martie

Moderator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-09-21

Posts 28049
California

8 posted 2002-06-18 08:14 PM

Barry

You take evermore to so many places of delight. Must be like Ethome said, you define the word "romantic".

Mistletoe Angel

Member Empyrean

since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

9 posted 2002-06-18 10:50 PM

"I wait again
til rise of moon, set of light.
Til ragged hot breath caresses my ear
again..whispering....
evermore..."

(smiles) Awwwwwww, this is soooooo beautiful, sweet friend, your sensual beautiful words always take us to places only Muses and your own heart can create! (big hugggsssssss) This is fabulous, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Barry, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

the_loner_23
Member Ascendant

since 2002-06-08

Posts 5479
Jacksonville, Florida, USA

10 posted 2002-06-18 10:51 PM

I feel the romance in this poem.

Cold hands means a warm heart

Sven

Member Laureate

since 1999-11-23

Posts 14937
East Lansing, MI USA

11 posted 2002-06-19 04:39 PM

all I can say is. . .

wow. . .

and that's a good thing. . .

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To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world.

Pilgrimage
Member Elite

since 2001-12-04

Posts 3945
Texas, USA

12 posted 2002-06-19 05:09 PM

This is pure romance and moonlight. And that's grand.

Nan

catalinamoon

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-06-03

Posts 9543
The Shores of Alone

13 posted 2002-06-19 08:33 PM

Mmm, this is wonderful.
Sandra

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

14 posted 2002-06-20 03:10 PM

Enjoyed...James

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