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Open Poetry #21

A Child

LilTai
Member

since 2002-06-08

Posts 189
United States

0 posted 2002-06-10 05:53 PM

(****I REALLY really appologize for writing so much tonight...I'm trying to stop, I swear! Sorry!!!)

A Child

A child born new
a new, untainted veiw
And unlike me and you
He doesn't think about what to do
Pure Instinct
is what I wish I had
Corrupted Decisions
are what make a life bad
Biased Favoritism
decides what we do
seems none of your decisions
are really up to you
Selfish Motivation
a personal declaration
Everything you do
reflects back upon you

The beauty of a child
a child with no anger
a child with no hate
...a child with no feelings to debate

Tai

I'm an idealist..I don't know where I'm going, but I'm on my way =)

Sunshine

Administrator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

1 posted 2002-06-29 09:24 PM

A very interesting read...

Kethry
Member Rara Avis

since 2000-07-29

Posts 9082
Victoria Australia

2 posted 2002-06-29 09:31 PM

Tai,
we are all templates waiting for the imprint of love. Very well expressed poem.
Kethry

Here in the midst of my lonely abyss, a single joy I find...your presence in my mind. Unknown

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