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Open Poetry #21
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Furie
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since 2002-06-17
Posts 39
Myriad of Unkown Places
0 posted 2002-06-18 03:49 PM

When you feel the tepid water
Filling your sneaker
And the thickness close
Around your ankle
And hear the squelching,
Sucking sound-

-Well, then you know
You've stepped in it.
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the_loner_23
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since 2002-06-08
Posts 5479
Jacksonville, Florida, USA
1 posted 2002-06-18 03:59 PM

That has a lot of truth

Cold hands means a warm heart
wayoutwalt
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since 1999-06-22
Posts 4870
TEXAS (it's all big)
2 posted 2002-06-18 04:02 PM

heheheh yuh
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