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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone 
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(Just got back from 2 days at a lovely beach in Maine) I ride upon the winds of ocean deep insatiable, my soul the sea must keep I wander under stars close to the moon and ponder if my lover's coming soon. Waves crash upon the sands of perfect love and dreams which never shall be certain of while seagulls flaunt their joy upon the sand there's nothing I can do to understand. Take me unto the deepest waves of blue for life without is nothing I can do and starlights touch upon my open heart would show that we should never be apart. Lost moments which can never be regained though thoughtfulness will aways be the same while longing never gives my soul a rest still tides do flow and life must pass this test. |
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Pilgrimage Member Elite
since 2001-12-04
Posts 3945Texas, USA |
I enjoyed the images, and especially the last line. Nan |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Hi Sandra! This sure is very beautiful. Hope you had a great time in Maine! Would be wonderful to see. Really enjoyed the read. ~Hugs~ |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
haven't done maine but the beachs here are grand, and a moment there is a week of freedom enjoyed it ms sandra |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Sandra, don't you so enjoy when your muse comes, AND goes on vacation with you... and all you bring back is a wonderful tan and some deep inspire? |
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Madame Chipmunk Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-05
Posts 8296Michigan |
Waves crash upon the sands of perfect love and dreams which never shall be certain of while seagulls flaunt their joy upon the sand there's nothing I can do to understand. This is so perfectly lovely, Sandra... It sounds like you had a wonderful vacation... I have been to Maine and I know how beautiful it is and it sounds like it inspired you because your poem is so excellent.  ~ welcome back hugsLyra |
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Alicia Member
since 2002-03-22
Posts 279 |
~Sandra, I often sit by or walk along the ocean and hear things, if you listen close enough it's whispers will find your ear,...you seem to have been. This is beautiful, tender, and so full. I'm pleased to have read it. Take care you. *Peace. |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
Alicia's right Sandra. . . the ocean speaks. . . it looks like you listened. . .  wonderful. . . ----------------------------------------------------------- To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world. |
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wranx Member Elite
since 2002-06-07
Posts 3689Moved from a shack to a barn |
Sandra, I haven't been to Maine in many years...this poem took me back to a dark and rocky beach that was being pummeled by a great purple beast of an ocean. Under all of the angry foaming froth, and the train wreck impacts, you could hear the deep throated roar of a very serious lion. I was happy to return, for awhile. ~thanx wranx "Writing is a perfectly natural thing to do....just remember to wash your hands afterward"....Heinlein. |
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SmartChick Member Rara Avis
since 2001-09-23
Posts 7081On A Journey To The Unknown |
What a wonderful view. Thank you for sharing this with us. |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Sandra, Well done and these lines are my pick. while longing never gives my soul a rest still tides do flow and life must pass this test. |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (big hugggsssssssss) Oh Sandra, again I can understand your yearning here, but like you said, every wave brings new artifacts and I know among the pebbles on the beach you will find atrue love that is bound to make you happy forever! (kiss on cheek) This is so touching, sweet friend, we all love you so much, by the way, I got your e-mail and will tell you all about my vacation, you can tell me about Maine too, YAY, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Sandra, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
A heartbeat bathed in the depths of the sea my friend. I really liked this one! ThisDiamond |
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bsquirrel
since 2000-01-03
Posts 7855 |
Any poem with a title like that must be read... That was yummy good. She said burn ... together. |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
Sandra This is a beautiful poem! Your muse was really active while you were away. These lines are dynamite! "while longing never gives my soul a rest still tides do flow and life must pass this test." Write on Ocean poet! |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
beautiful images kissed in your gift of cadence... Id say the ocean was indeed speaking to your muse...this is lovely in its emote as well as its seascape scenes...like a poetic postcard... well done poetess. "It's not about having what you want ... |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Isn't it too cold for the beach in MAINE? Does sound as though someone had loads of fun while they were there....hmmmmmm???? |
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