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Marsha

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-07-10

Posts 7423
Maidstone Kent England

0 posted 2002-06-17 07:57 PM

Dreamers Wish

Follow the thread of glowing thought
Strung together in wonders sought
Inside the mind of poet’s dream
Love waits to show a face unseen

Unwrap the cloud reveal the touch
Which hides within the wish of such
Dismiss the thought of nevermore
Hold to your heart the seek of sure

Reveal your hope your wish is true
Reach for the star that calls to you
These dreams don’t fade just don’t let go
Believe in dreams and let hope flow

Open your mind to surity
Give thought a breath of certainty
Within you there is so much more
Take to the sky and you will soar

Marsha

Breathe through the heat of our desire
Thy coolness and they balm
Let sense be dumb let flesh retire
Speak through the eathquake wind and fire
Oh

Enchantress
Member Empyrean

since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

1 posted 2002-06-17 08:05 PM

Reveal your hope your wish is true
Reach for the star that calls to you
These dreams don’t fade just don’t let go
Believe in dreams and let hope flow
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This is my favourite stanza Marsha...
but I love the entire piece...
SO well done!
~Hugs~

Magnus

Member Laureate

since 2001-10-10

Posts 14135
South Carolina, USA

2 posted 2002-06-17 08:12 PM

Mushy, I feel this poem...I have felt this
poem...

Exceptional....Yes...let it go...let it
flow...

Utterly divine, darling girl...OH yes it is.

Goodknight
Member Elite

since 2002-06-15

Posts 2386
Ohio, USA

3 posted 2002-06-17 09:12 PM

So very much for a dreamer to wish on and a wonderful poem to read and feel - Thanks Paul

Seymour Tabin
Member Empyrean

since 1999-07-07

Posts 31720
Tamarac Fla

4 posted 2002-06-17 09:31 PM

Marsha,
You are more of a romantic than I am. Wonderful write.

Mistletoe Angel

Member Empyrean

since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

5 posted 2002-06-17 10:37 PM

(smiles) Oh Marsha, this is sooooooo beautiful, sweet friend, I know you are going to make your love so very happy always, always hold that wish true and it will happen! (kiss on cheek) This is lovely, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Marsha, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

Madame Chipmunk
Member Rara Avis

since 2001-12-05

Posts 8296
Michigan

6 posted 2002-06-17 10:52 PM

Oh so dreamy and romantic, Marsha...
and so very well done too!

~ dreamy hugs

Lyra

copyright2002 Lyra Nesius

"poetry is life distilled" Gwendolyn Brooks

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