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Magnus

Member Laureate

since 2001-10-10

Posts 14135
South Carolina, USA

0 posted 2002-06-17 03:34 PM

Here..
deep within
the confines of the heart
of the soul and a mind
awake.

Can this mind, of man feel?
Feel with the intensity and passion.
Passion of a magnitude
immeasurable.

Love within a heart, swelling,
given freely from a giving soul
wanting but one thing
in return.

Shelter not this heart from love’s pain
for within the mind love endures.
Pains of loss, of moments and memories.
Pain which can only be felt when....
when one has known and felt
true, unconditional love.

If with this love comes pain.
Pain which unquestionably hurts.
Flog me till tears bleed freely....
For true love endures eternally
in memories...

Sunshine

Administrator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

1 posted 2002-06-17 03:35 PM

Yes....

Excellent!

the_loner_23
Member Ascendant

since 2002-06-08

Posts 5479
Jacksonville, Florida, USA

2 posted 2002-06-17 03:51 PM

Excellent

Cold hands means a warm heart

Enchantress
Member Empyrean

since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

3 posted 2002-06-17 04:54 PM

YES!!! YES! YES!! Excellent!
Barry...you do free verse very well.
Love it!!
~Hugging you!!~

~Somewhere in my heart I'm always
dancing with you in the summer rain~

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

4 posted 2002-06-17 05:01 PM

Definately nice...James

LilTai
Member

since 2002-06-08

Posts 189
United States

5 posted 2002-06-17 05:40 PM

I love it!!

And I love this style of writing, AND you do it so perfectly and it flows beautifully....Wonderful job with this! And such a beautiful poem...*sigh*...

Tai

I'm an idealist..I don't know where I'm going, but I'm on my way =)

Marsha

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-07-10

Posts 7423
Maidstone Kent England

6 posted 2002-06-17 07:41 PM

Magnus darling heart and holder of my soul’s reason, this is utterly utterly delightful. You know I love it utterly brilliant. The soft sound you can hear is my almost soundless sigh of breathless wonder. This is better than good it is utterly utterly superb darling boy. Of course you know that, and pretending you don’t doesn’t wash with me darling boy, you know I’m up to all your tricks.

Have we not discussed the way you simply outclass me constantly? I’m not asking for much a little slip in quality once in a while wouldn’t hurt, your reputation wouldn’t suffer, and I might just get a reply or two that didn’t say. Mushy must do better.

As I said this is superb, I’ll forgive you because I adore you, but still………… just a tiny slip……….. I won’t tell anyone I promise

Love and warm stuff
As always
Mushy

Breathe through the heat of our desire
Thy coolness and they balm
Let sense be dumb let flesh retire
Speak through the eathquake wind and fire
Oh

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