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Open Poetry #21

In Her Dreams

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

0 posted 2002-06-17 06:37 AM

In Her Dreams

It all seemed so
disrespectful
to me.
First she left me and
second she wanted
to come back
to me.
But she could only fit me
in after breaking up
with her new
boyfriend.
Seems he wasn't all the
prince he seemed.
He could only keep her happy
in her dreams.

JamesLee
June16
2002
WayIn
MyPast.
ISaid
NO.
Wouldn't
You?

ethome
Member Patricius

since 2000-05-14

Posts 11858
New Brunswick Canada

1 posted 2002-06-17 06:53 AM

Another succinct but perceptive write from your pen James!

the_loner_23
Member Ascendant

since 2002-06-08

Posts 5479
Jacksonville, Florida, USA

2 posted 2002-06-17 03:54 PM

James you always write awesome poetry

Cold hands means a warm heart

Mark Bohannan
Member Rara Avis

since 2000-06-21

Posts 7269
In the winds of Cherokee song

3 posted 2002-06-17 06:27 PM

As if the lessons in life weren't enough, then they gotta toss in that love thing. Nice write and nice to see you still here. I have been gone too long.

Pilgrimage
Member Elite

since 2001-12-04

Posts 3945
Texas, USA

4 posted 2002-06-17 06:29 PM

This is an awesome poem. I've been in the same situation, he wanted to come back after his new girlfriend found out what he was really like. I said I didn't think so.

Nan

Mistletoe Angel

Member Empyrean

since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

5 posted 2002-06-17 06:29 PM

(big hugggssssss) Oh James, I feel so many can indeed relate to this kind of pain, sweet friend, my heart goes out to the many afflicted with this sorrow and I hope they can find comfort outside their dreams also! (sigh) This is heartfelt, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Hope, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

Dulcinea
Senior Member

since 2001-07-22

Posts 774
IN

6 posted 2002-06-17 06:43 PM

I would agree, she had no respect for you. Love is more than that. Very well stated James.

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