Open Poetry #21 |
Circumstances Of Heart |
HopeS Member Elite
since 2000-12-22
Posts 4596Perth Western Australia |
Circumstances Of Heart Instead of a stalemate Silence should be ending I have asked questions Are the answers pending Awaiting your decision Thoughts are sent erratic Causing this deadlock Communication is static This hopeless feeling We found ourselves in Here at this standstill Where no one can win Powers of grasping Mind holding the links Inwardly I can view My lonely heart sinks My forever invitation He slowly ripped apart A mind states the fact Circumstances of heart Hope ©2002 |
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the_loner_23 Member Ascendant
since 2002-06-08
Posts 5479Jacksonville, Florida, USA |
Beautiful. Just beautiful Cold hands means a warm heart |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
(big hugggssssss) Oh Hope, this is wonderful, sweet friend, my heart goes out to you and I hope this loneliness has disappeared now and comfort fills your heart! (kiss on cheek) This is wonderful, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Hope, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
Such wisdom captured in a wonderfully smooth read and the cadence of your word didn't miss a beat. Well done and a very enjoyable read. |
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