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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast 
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the fourth angel rode from the desert edges and put his youth in red and white wings from his mouth he spoke lead and ryu he was the new army of know no sky from the valley thay came in leather their horses were loud hooved the sun set early under stones fix way songs stirred the blond leg women they ran from the avenue to dark streets and waited for the breath of sin to brush their lips with now burn they would be empty tomorrow but they would whisper the names of black ink that swims under skin of red ink that makes the eyes glass of the snow dust that makes smile faces the fourth angel knows hell love now ©Dark (angel wake # 4) |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
  (sigh) Wow, this is sooooooo wonderfull sensual, sweet friend, it comes to show even angels can be tempted! (big hugggssssss) Such passion fills your words, sweet friend, I love your series, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet friend, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
noah, thanks my friend...actually was a hells angel tribute over the weekend to the 4th angel that has gone since the river run war started... |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
Raphael---I know him well...  you are quite remarkable. |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
Ms serene... Don't think it is the same one..(grin), but sure appreciate your reviews. |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
Well hell, you mean to say when I get to heaven I have to take a number? Ok I'll be two! Nice poem DS~ |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
bluezy..you don't ever have to take a number..just look out for the pipes..they are hot as hell (grin) thanks babe |
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Decaflame Senior Member
since 2001-05-11
Posts 1635 |
Burned bare leg on the pipe, just once |
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Pilgrimage Member Elite
since 2001-12-04
Posts 3945Texas, USA |
When I read this poem I was struck with the mystery and strangeness. I like it. Nan |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
deca.. we got the best first aid for that many more rides til you know' where that pipe is..(grin) thanks lady Pilgrimage, thanks for the review, real time in angel world is strange and severe |
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rwood Member Elite
since 2000-02-29
Posts 3793Tennessee |
Your eyes teach me..inform me and make me see more than what is viable. Wonderful write D. Sincerely, Reg |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
regina, my eyes enjoy your company wear them often ms, thanks babe |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
*smiling here* |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
enchantress, sure like that smile ok, where did you hide the keys.. thanks babe |
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Dulcinea Senior Member
since 2001-07-22
Posts 774IN |
I have always enjoyed your image poems best, and this is no exception...nicely done DS. |
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wranx Member Elite
since 2002-06-07
Posts 3689Moved from a shack to a barn |
Thoughtful imagery, thanks for the craftsmanship Stellar read. (wasn't she a soap actress?) ~wranx "Writing is a perfectly natural thing to do....just remember to wash your hands afterward"....Heinlein. |
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Goodknight Member Elite
since 2002-06-15
Posts 2386Ohio, USA |
images images images - they are on the surface and oh so deep - captivating - Paul |
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