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ambermize
Member

since 2001-04-21

Posts 157
California

0 posted 2002-06-17 12:41 PM

I write to you today,
In confusion, I speak,
But let the calm set in,
As once agian you ignore me.

I sing to you today,
In disbelief, I cry,
Because I made this,
And sitting alone now, I sigh.

I laugh at me today,
In ignorance, I whisper,
So as not to let you hear,
That I just need your comfort.

I dance with you today,
In silence, I wish,
That I was someone else,
With a soul far more beautiful, than this.

I kiss you today,
In blindness, I sink,
Deep into the heart of you,
Still not knowing what you think.

I make love to you today,
In bliss, I break,
Because I know I shouldnt be here,
I have put to much at stake.

Saunni
Senior Member

since 2000-07-11

Posts 1777
West Virginia

1 posted 2002-06-17 01:03 AM

ambermize, sad! But, an awesome write!

Be well!

Sauni:)The Only Time I See The Sun Is When I'm Within That Vanilla Breeze.The Only Time I'm One With The Sun Is When He Shelters Me From The Rain. L.S

devina
Member Elite

since 1999-10-28

Posts 3539
Cali

2 posted 2002-06-17 11:06 AM

I dance with you today,
In silence, I wish,
That I was someone else,
With a soul far more beautiful, than this.

You are beautiful inside and out Amber...YOUR soul is not at question here...

Be patient...even though it has never been our forte...

love you sis
Tanya

Open arms can be the most fragile in the world...

Goodknight
Member Elite

since 2002-06-15

Posts 2386
Ohio, USA

3 posted 2002-06-17 11:55 AM

Such feeling and such openness into the soul of relating. Words that cause one to ponder - words that haunt. Thanks for the beautiful words.

Madame Chipmunk
Member Rara Avis

since 2001-12-05

Posts 8296
Michigan

4 posted 2002-06-17 12:02 PM

I kiss you today,
In blindness, I sink,
Deep into the heart of you,
Still not knowing what you think.

We all take gambles, Amber...
this is very beautiful and honest,

~ lots of hugs

Lyra

copyright2002 Lyra Nesius

"poetry is life distilled" Gwendolyn Brooks

LilTai
Member

since 2002-06-08

Posts 189
United States

5 posted 2002-06-17 12:40 PM

So sad and heartfelt...(its amazing you can put so much emotion into it yet still have it be so well written!)
Like devina said, you just hafta be patient..its so hard but good things will come...a quote from Musiq Soulchild (r&b singer) that I like is "time waits for nothing...and everything is gonna take its time"
I loved this, excellent job.
*hugs*

Tai

I'm an idealist..I don't know where I'm going, but I'm on my way =)

Seymour Tabin
Member Empyrean

since 1999-07-07

Posts 31720
Tamarac Fla

6 posted 2002-06-17 12:44 PM

ambermize
Good write enjoyed the read.

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