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Love Beneath The Lighthouse
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Love Beneath The Lighthouse |
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Suetang Member Ascendant
since 2001-03-07
Posts 5187Melbourne, Australia 
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At the edge of the lighthouse you'll find me Bathed in the golden glow of the sun Won't you take my hand and I'll lead you And together along the sand we will run By the edge of the water I'll kiss you As love's kiss brings us to our knees So much love to be made in this paradise As we are both so eager to please We'll succumb to our needs and desires As we swim in the turquoise blue sea Then we'll ride our own waves of passion And towards heaven you will transport me Soon the moon will shine like a beacon As we search for constellations above Then we'll dive with reckless abandon Into our very own sea of love Suetang |
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the_loner_23 Member Ascendant
since 2002-06-08
Posts 5479Jacksonville, Florida, USA |
 I like this one a lotCold hands means a warm heart |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
Whew! This is sensual stuff Sue! Don't I love these lines!! "Soon the moon will shine like a beacon As we search for constellations above Then we'll dive with reckless abandon Into our very own sea of love" Watch out guys! Hot romantic Aussie on the loose. I'm just gonna lean here against this glass and look available! Good stuff Sue! |
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ShadowRider Senior Member
since 2001-07-14
Posts 1038USA |
Beam's End when pierced night beams from a lighthouse shine until the last wave's crest holds the final ray of light future meets present dreams they are yours and mine polished awe we know best makes our own glow to light the night. Enthralling capture of love's light, Sue and it inspired with hope, this writer. JkF [This message has been edited by ShadowRider (06-16-2002 10:40 PM).] |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (smiles) Oh Sue, this is wonderful, sweet friend, your gorgeous words always illuminate these pages like that lighthouse you build! (kiss on cheek) May you always find heaven in his eyes, sweet friend, I love it, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Sue, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
SueTang~ Aha ! So THIS is where you moved~ Nice pad, gal !!!  *Hugs* ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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Dulcinea Senior Member
since 2001-07-22
Posts 774IN |
I enjoyed the sweet simplicity of the gentle way your light shone in this piece Sue! Tenderly romantic! |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Of course...I am a sucker for beaches and lighthouses....and the sea... So, I guess that I must have liked this one. Yep, I did.... |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Sounds wonderful...come with me to the sea of love...James |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
Sue darling girl OH my word this is excellent writing, what can I say darling heart your writing shines through every single word. You’ve always written well, often excellently right now you are simply soaring. You know I love this, it flows with the smoothness of silk, beautiful work darling utterly utterly superb, and of course I love it utterly. The imagery in this is one of your best I think, truly exquisite writing   Love and warm stuff As always Mushy Breathe through the heat of our desire |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
I like this very much! *S* |
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