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Open Poetry #21

Concord

GOlDsparklESS
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since 2001-12-13

Posts 428
central nj

0 posted 2002-08-13 05:54 PM

Daydreamer vision
tears waxing
Residual
Collections of wish

((I can only hold this apparition inside))

Over to a path once yearned; solaced and flooded with impassioned clarity as a
Melody speaking a soul’s solstice;
Rare as the sojourning flash of storm
((Deliverance of a love unleashed))

perhaps:
serenity

Essential
Unearthed pyre symbolic of an epiphany
… pirouetting toward
Revelation …

Sunshine

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since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

1 posted 2002-08-13 10:10 PM

Perhaps I am tired, so I shall
mark this for a reading tomorrow, as well...
there is something deep in here, but I am
not sure what it is you want me to see...

I shall be back...

GOlDsparklESS
Member

since 2001-12-13

Posts 428
central nj

2 posted 2002-08-16 08:48 PM

Sunshine,

this poem is an expression of moments of clarity, when i see that peace is the one thing can free me.

thanks.

EagleScorpion
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since 2000-03-08

Posts 1644
Here, Now, Forever

3 posted 2002-09-10 10:51 PM

wow i cant believe i missed this one. wow. i wonder why you called the poem "Concord".
yes there is definately.. yes... yea.. ok

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