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Revenant Ramble
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Revenant Ramble |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores 
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Revenant Ramble ~*Marge Tindal*~ When spirits ramble, what care I ? Ghostly curl of fingertipped sigh Tap, tap, tapping of the quill as words await shadowed spill~ Scratch the parchment etch the sketch not much use in wording fetch~ Sit of Poe in raven's crave revenant ramble from the grave~ Past the step of stoned defeat grab of garble now in flee Touch the head of stoned recline read the engrave ... read the line~ Death cannot hold me pale circling moon in phased regale See the poet rot in word nevermore ... to be heard~ Seance summon beyond the time Perhaps once more in revenant rhyme~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
Margie girl darling sister of my heart have you any concept how special your writing is to me? Always I read it and ALWAYS, But ALWAYS I marvel at how wonderfully your words flow. Lyrical and poetically dancing down the page to pirouette in perfect steps of splendour. I love this one truly perfect. I love it utterly utterly utterly love it and you KNEW I was going to say that didn’t you, Mmmm or course you did darling heart I may be predictable but I do have excellent taste   Love and warm stuff As always Mushy  Breathe through the heat of our desire |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
Marge, loved this walk on the darker side from you. It has an eerie Poe feel to it. Kethry Here in the midst of my lonely abyss, a single joy I find...your presence in my mind. Unknown |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Yes! A  ! |
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Betty Senior Member
since 2002-08-13
Posts 1159Virginia |
This is different & I really like it. Of course, I love all your work. ~Betty~ |
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Trillium
since 2001-03-09
Posts 12098Idaho, USA |
Marge: Is it possible Poe has become one of your muses? Or perhaps he is guiding your pen in this one? Betty Lou Hebert |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
MarshaLove~ Sometimes they just come ... this was definitely one of 'those' times~ 'Predictable' ? Who ... you ? LOL ! Me wub you~ Kethry~ You got it right ... that Poe dude was all over my ink-of-think~ Thanks gal~ Karilea~ Thankee~  Betty !!!  Do you have ANY idea how wonderful it is to see YOU here ? Oh my gosh .... if it took Poe to get you here, I'm grateful to him~ Welcome to Passions, my dear, dear friend~ You've just made my day ~ BettyLou~ Lordy, I hope not~ But this one slid off the wall and compromised my ink~ Thank you so much dear lady~ *Hugs* ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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Elizabeth Santos Member Rara Avis
since 1999-11-08
Posts 9269Pennsylvania |
I loved this! Great one, Marge!! Liz |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
LovelyLizzie~ Thank you sweet poetess~ So good to see you dear lady~ *Hugs* ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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lucky Senior Member
since 2000-01-17
Posts 1601Idaho |
Hi ya Sis Just wanted to let you know I am here... from time to time. Dale Writing isn't just something I do, it's something I am. |
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Paul Wilson
since 2002-07-07
Posts 4711United States |
Marge... I wanted to say something catchy in my reply, but after reading this poem I am speachless. So many visions created in my mind by this super poem.  Paul |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Lucky !  'time to time' is not enough ...~ You and Rosemary are often in my thoughts ... Thank you for the WONDERFUL e-mail~ You both are so busy with life ... and tell Katie I said 'Kiss him gal'~ (Your papa story reminded me of the story of you and Rosemary !) My condolences to Rosemary in the loss of her father ... and to you for the loss of such a dear man in your life~ Congratulations to Rosemary for the 'publishing' news ! I look forward to hearing when the book will be out~ (and don't forget me ... you scamp !) Gosh ... e-mail will follow .... Honest Injun~ Love n' hugs n' sweet wishes to the whole family~ Paul~ I'd say that just catching you speechless is more than enough said~ Thank you sooooooooo much~ *HUGS* ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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jellybeans Member Elite
since 2000-10-13
Posts 2298 |
I love this!!!!!!!! wonderful work  |
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SimplyGold Senior Member
since 2002-07-10
Posts 1453 |
This gave me a little shiver. Nice write from the "other side". I had the feeling someone was penning through you... Very fluid, like clouds moving through air. |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
JellyGal~ Thanks so much~ I appreciate you~ SimplyGold~ Thank you ... actually you are 'very' right~ I came to turn off the computer ... and 'someone' took the quill of my mind and *gifted* me this write~ That happens often and I'm grateful for it~ Glad you enjoyed it ... even with the little shiver~  *Hugs* ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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