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Gentle Spirit
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since 2000-10-09

Posts 13989

0 posted 2002-08-13 06:24 AM

                              He gave her a rose, and it made her cry.
                              It made her cry, though he couldn't understand why.
                              He asked her 'My dear, what did I do?'
                              "What did I do to bring forth tears from you?'

                              When she looked up to give her replies,
                              he could see the love there in her eyes.
                              She finally said, through a very soft sigh,
                              'It's the most beautiful thing I've ever seen.'
                              'That is what made me cry.'

                              He told her 'My love, I just can't agree that it's true.'
                              'The only beauty I see is when I look at you.'
                              Then a smile slowly came to her lips,
                              and he bent over to gently give her a kiss.

                              He whispered to her softly
                              'I love you so much, Lord only knows'
                              'To me you will always be more beautiful
                              than a rose!'

somebody tell me, please help me....
understand.......(as sung by Trace Adkins)

{on the wings of words are spirits fly...and our souls are free~me

Professor Gloom
Member Elite

since 2000-07-23

Posts 3082
of Depression

1 posted 2002-08-13 07:38 AM

Lovely bit of romantic poetry,
And I know it’s true.

Gloom

catalinamoon

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-06-03

Posts 9543
The Shores of Alone

2 posted 2002-08-13 07:45 AM

Very sweet, the rose means so much, so many different aspects.
Sandra

Seymour Tabin
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since 1999-07-07

Posts 31720
Tamarac Fla

3 posted 2002-08-13 07:49 AM

Gentle Spirit
Did you tell him that? A lovely write.

Gentle Spirit
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since 2000-10-09

Posts 13989

4 posted 2002-08-13 08:08 AM

Thank you Gloom.

Sandra, yes there are so very many different aspects. thanks for reading.

Sey, no I didn't tell him that. This was actually written a few years ago when I was going through my 'romantic stage' Thanks for the read.

Enchantress
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since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

5 posted 2002-08-13 09:10 AM

Ahhh lovely and romantic Donna.
Enjoyed this one with my cup of tea this morning.
~Hugs sweetie~

Dark Stranger
Member Patricius

since 2001-03-19

Posts 13631
West Coast

6 posted 2002-08-13 09:14 AM

romantica on you
is like scent on the flower
you glow it ms donna

enjoyed this babe

Mistletoe Angel

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since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

7 posted 2002-08-13 08:12 PM

"He whispered to her softly
                              'I love you so much, Lord only knows'
                              'To me you will always be more beautiful
                              than a rose!'"

(big huggggssssssssss) Oh Donna, this is soooooooo beautiful, it made me cry because it reminded me of my own RosePetal and how i truly feel she is more beautiful than any rose that can try and compare to her! (kiss on cheek) This is a sweet and sensitive gorgeous love poem, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Donna, thank you for sharing!