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Kethry
Member Rara Avis

since 2000-07-29

Posts 9082
Victoria Australia

0 posted 2002-08-13 05:05 AM

I love you dear and I must leave
can't be this tower of strength for you
all of your pain and rampant grieve
has endless ache in all you do

It breaks my heart but I must go
can't take the hurt of seeing you
so in despair and lost to woe
can't help the way it makes me blue

I have to go, don't beg me stay
I cannot hold you near to me
I have no power to change the way
of your pain, it's clear to me

Let me live away from here
Don't hold me here please let me be
for all our love, we end in tears
all I now want is to be free

destructive love is what we share
your pain my passion from the start
so let me go if you do care
and let me build again my heart.

Here in the midst of my lonely abyss, a single joy I find...your presence in my mind. Unknown

WhiteRose
Member Elite

since 2002-07-23

Posts 3208
somebody's dungeon

1 posted 2002-08-13 09:44 AM

Man have I been there! Filled with feeling Kethry. Very nicely done.

In truth, what defines us is our poetry.

Dark Stranger
Member Patricius

since 2001-03-19

Posts 13631
West Coast

2 posted 2002-08-13 10:19 AM

yes!!!! ms kethry, you unzipped it and showed the scar in daylight...well done lady friend.

Seymour Tabin
Member Empyrean

since 1999-07-07

Posts 31720
Tamarac Fla

3 posted 2002-08-13 10:25 AM

Keth,
You have my empathy and love.

Good write.

Goodknight
Member Elite

since 2002-06-15

Posts 2386
Ohio, USA

4 posted 2002-08-13 10:27 AM

your poetry is a powerful invitation to see the pain of which you write to eloquently - this is very well done - Paul

Marsha

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-07-10

Posts 7423
Maidstone Kent England

5 posted 2002-08-13 08:13 PM

Keth beloved heart what can I say about this that I haven’t already, it is exceptional, the words flow like water, the content is perfect, the meaning is sadness personified. I’m trying brevity darling heart in preparation for your workshop. Do you think I’ll succeed? No I don’t either, I think you’ll be flogging a dead horse, but I’ll try just pour vous

I love this you know that anyway exquisite writing, you never ever fail to write the best. I love it utterly utterly utterly

Love and warm stuff
As always
Mushy

Breathe through the heat of our desire
Thy coolness and they balm
Let sense be dumb let flesh retire
Speak through the earthquake wind and fire

Mistletoe Angel

Member Empyrean

since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

6 posted 2002-08-13 08:16 PM

(big hugggsssssss) Oh Kethry, this is so very sad, my heart goes out to you and I hope soon love builds you a true home bound to last and be comely forever! (sigh) This is very heartfelt, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Kethry, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

7 posted 2002-12-31 03:15 AM

I've been on both sides here...both heartbreaking!

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