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Kellie_Cantrell Senior Member
since 2002-05-22
Posts 1667New York 
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Crashing through the iceburg of your heart comes a ship larger than the Titanic making you shiver and shake inside there is only half a lifeboat in your heart taking away each breath so desperately a love of life sweeps from your tear filled eyes i can take your pain away built upon a stoney ground my heart filled with sweetness to give all around don't let your shipyard get ship wrecked let me soothe your heart let me be your crying ground |
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VAS Member Rara Avis
since 2000-11-16
Posts 7450Oregon |
I'm guessing, but I think I'm pretty close, the 'encouraging voice' in this piece is the Supreme Lighthouse, the One who heals, loves and guides, right? My second guess is that it's another person who cares and is offering a shoulder and a listening ear. Whether on the shoal or on the shore, |
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VAS Member Rara Avis
since 2000-11-16
Posts 7450Oregon |
wish I could bump this to #22 so it get another chance for view perhaps a repost is in order friend so it'll have a chance before the end Whether on the shoal or on the shore, |
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