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Open Poetry #21

The Castles In The Sky

HopeS
Member Elite

since 2000-12-22

Posts 4596
Perth Western Australia

0 posted 2002-08-12 01:35 PM

The Castles In The Sky

As the castles in sand
Crumbles to the sea
The night draws nigh
To dreams of fantasy

Land of enchantment
To castles in the sky
Come and follow me
We romantics can fly

Travelling the galaxy
Upon magical wings
Pathways to the sky
Where ecstasy sings

Backdrop glows red
A shimmering moon
Celestial splendours
Upon a golden dune

Here forever begins
We each had a key
Never ending dream
The castle of fantasy

Each window bright
No questioning why
In dreams we enter
The castle in the sky

Hope©2002

SmartChick
Member Rara Avis

since 2001-09-23

Posts 7081
On A Journey To The Unknown

1 posted 2002-08-12 02:05 PM

This is beautiful.

Mistletoe Angel

Member Empyrean

since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

2 posted 2002-08-12 06:18 PM

(smiles) Awwwwwww, I love this, sweet friend, romantics sure can fly and may you always fly happily in grace like the dove in peace! (kiss on cheek) This is beautiful, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Hope, thank you for sharing!

May love and light alwyas shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

Eloise
Senior Member

since 1999-11-27

Posts 1096
Wyoming

3 posted 2002-08-12 06:51 PM

What a lovely write Hope. I love the land of enchantment.

Seymour Tabin
Member Empyrean

since 1999-07-07

Posts 31720
Tamarac Fla

4 posted 2002-08-12 07:30 PM

HopeS,
You write so well, this is a delightful read.

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