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Of Time's Passing
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Of Time's Passing |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines 
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Of Time's Passing Night sky graces the dark with its stars In moments passing, drifting go I Dreams of a time when in arms comfort, yours 'Til daylight appears and the stars are in hide. Time moves so quickly, unfolding its hold Beauty and truth seem to lessen its wear Not enough time, as each morn begins rise Waiting for never, a time once to share. Do you recall any moment from this? Frozen in mind, each memory's kiss Uncovering my thoughts wherein shadows lie To be second to none, in time's passing, wish I. Someday, maybe, perhaps time will slow In arms each comforted, a love to bestow. M "Love is not blind - It sees more and not less, but because it sees more, it is willing to see less." |
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WhiteRose Member Elite
since 2002-07-23
Posts 3208somebody's dungeon |
Do you recall any moment from this? Frozen in mind, each memory's kiss This is a unique turn of phrase and it stuck out in this poem. To think of a memory as a kiss frozen in your mind. I like this very much. A novel perspective. In truth, what defines us is our poetry. |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
Oh Maureen, I sure HOPE they recall some of what meant so much to us. This is powerful. Sandra |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Wynter~ 'Do you recall any moment from this? Frozen in mind, each memory's kiss Uncovering my thoughts wherein shadows lie To be second to none, in time's passing, wish I. Someday, maybe, perhaps time will slow In arms each comforted, a love to bestow.' And some days ... it's all I can recall~ Lovely .... lovely~ *Hugs* ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
WhiteRose, thank you for the kind response. *s Sandra, I doubt that much of what we feel is felt by "them". But one can always hope, hugss M vandana, I am always so happy to see you have stopped by to read me. Thank you V. Marge~ I would someday like to believe that I am someone's priority, again...I can only hope. You are very lucky, both you and Bill to have found one another. many hugsss...counting the days M |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
Maureen darling heart only you could have written this, such sweet simplicity and such perfectly written beauty, Truly gorgeous writing darling heart I love it utterly   Love and warm stuff As always Mushy  Breathe through the heat of our desire |
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Suetang Member Ascendant
since 2001-03-07
Posts 5187Melbourne, Australia |
Hello Maureen This was simply lovely as is the photo of you. I hope all is well with you. Take care.....Sue I am in motion |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (big hugggssssss) Oh Maureen, this reminded me so much of that 80's one-hit wonder song "I'll stop the world and melt with you!" (sigh) This is wonderful, sweet friend, I know this will happen, just keep believing in loves magic, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Maureen, thank you for sharing!  May love and light alwyas shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
it only moves faster, i know that well |
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