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Eloise
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0 posted 2002-08-11 10:28 PM


On silver wings floating through the clouds
Visions of cotton candy I see.
And there begins many pleasant thoughts
With my mind wandering endlessly.

I can see the twinkle in your eye
And feel the warmth of your gentle touch.
The magic of this moment is mine.
I just close my eyes and don't say much.

I cradle these precious thoughts
As you saunter through my mind.
Of all the dreams we will make
And those we left behind.

This peaceful spell has now been broken
But together we will always be.
As I approach my destination,
Through those airport doors you wait for me.


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skyshine
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Beneath the northern stars
1 posted 2002-08-11 11:20 PM


This is beautiful, Eloise!

~Beth

You look inside my wild mind
never knowing what you'll find
still I want you all the time
yeah I do
'cause you get me
~Michelle Branch

Mistletoe Angel
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2 posted 2002-08-12 12:49 PM




(smiles) Always kjeep your chin up for I know your dreams are bound to come running to you in that airport terminal and then holding all that luggage of faith will be worth it! (kiss on cheek) This is heartfelt, sweet friend, I love it, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Eloise, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

Kethry
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Victoria Australia
3 posted 2002-08-12 09:11 AM


Lucky you, The only thing I get at airports is aggravation. If it wasn't for the flying I wouldn't bother.
Kethry

Here in the midst of my lonely abyss, a single joy I find...your presence in my mind.  Unknown



cjohnson/poet2079
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since 2002-07-31
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4 posted 2002-08-12 09:35 AM


Eloise, what "precious thoughts"; my heart takes flight; beautiful!

eyssence

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