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Golden Moments |
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Neeraja Senior Member
since 2002-06-22
Posts 812The Netherlands 
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My Beloved... my all... my other self... Sometimes there are surprising golden moments when it dawns on me... how much I love you... Mijn Lief... I miss you so very much... it's nearly unbearable... This void in my soul will not go away... until we are together again... I am only a shadow of myself without you... You are my universe... my all... my immortal love... forever... Your Lotus... |
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WhiteRose Member Elite
since 2002-07-23
Posts 3208somebody's dungeon |
This is lovely. I know it's hard to be away from someone we love. We miss them more and more each day. This poem is filled with your longing for the return of your love. Very nice write. In truth, what defines us is our poetry. |
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arthur Senior Member
since 2001-08-14
Posts 678england |
I wonder who it is that deserves such love? arthur |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Keep working at it, Neeraja... a longing such as this, so palpable, surely is meant to be.... |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Neeraja The write is lovely and a delight to read. |
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Madame Chipmunk Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-05
Posts 8296Michigan |
A very beautiful love letter, Neeraja... It literally cries with affection.  ~ hugs from a chipmunkLyra |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (big hugggssssss) Oh Neeraja, this is so very sadly beautiful, sweet friend, I hope you get to meet your love soon as you are soooo deserving of the greatest happiness as I wait for my Joanna! (kiss on cheek) This is gorgeous, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Neeraja, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
A beautiful write... So full of longing.. ~Hugs~ ~Somewhere in my heart I'm always |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
very nice..such sweet thoughts *s M |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
Neeraja - full of thoughts and wanting.. Lovely read it is... BC |
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