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Neeraja
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0 posted 2002-08-11 02:38 PM




My Beloved... my all... my other self...

Sometimes
there are surprising golden moments
when it dawns on me... how much I love you...

Mijn Lief...
I miss you so very much... it's nearly unbearable...

This void in my soul
will not go away... until we are together again...

I am only a shadow of myself
without you...

You are my universe... my all...
my immortal love...

forever...

Your Lotus...



© Copyright 2002 Neeraja Wittebrood - All Rights Reserved
WhiteRose
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somebody's dungeon
1 posted 2002-08-11 02:41 PM


This is lovely. I know it's hard to be away from someone we love. We miss them more and more each day. This poem is filled with your longing for the return of your love. Very nice write.

In truth, what defines us is our poetry.

arthur
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2 posted 2002-08-11 02:59 PM


I wonder who it is that deserves such love?
arthur

Sunshine
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3 posted 2002-08-11 03:00 PM



Keep working at it, Neeraja...
a longing such as this, so palpable,
surely is meant to be....

Seymour Tabin
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4 posted 2002-08-11 03:22 PM


Neeraja
The write is lovely and a delight to read.

Madame Chipmunk
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5 posted 2002-08-11 03:26 PM


A very beautiful love letter, Neeraja...
It literally cries with affection.
~ hugs from a chipmunk

Lyra

copyright2002 Lyra Nesius

"poetry is life distilled"  Gwendolyn Brooks

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6 posted 2002-08-11 06:01 PM




(big hugggssssss) Oh Neeraja, this is so very sadly beautiful, sweet friend, I hope you get to meet your love soon as you are soooo deserving of the greatest happiness as I wait for my Joanna! (kiss on cheek) This is gorgeous, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Neeraja, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

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7 posted 2002-08-11 06:36 PM


A beautiful write...
So full of longing..
~Hugs~

~Somewhere in my heart I'm always
dancing with you in the summer rain~

nakdthoughts
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Between the Lines
8 posted 2002-08-11 06:55 PM


very nice..such sweet thoughts
*s
M

Bill Charles
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9 posted 2002-08-11 07:04 PM


Neeraja - full of thoughts and wanting.. Lovely read it is...

BC

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