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Eloise
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0 posted 2002-08-11 02:56 AM


Underneath the canvas of the night
Irridescent moon is glowing bright.
Wrapped in the feel of magic all around.
Watching a falling star that makes no sound.

Casting a wish to the twinkling star
Bringing together two hearts from afar.
Though many miles keep them apart,
So strong is the bond between the heart.

At night each within their private land of dreams
Arriving together on silvery wings.
Fulfilling the heart with pure delight.
Brought by a star that soared through the night.

[This message has been edited by Eloise (08-11-2002 01:38 PM).]

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Sunshine
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Listening to every heart
1 posted 2002-08-11 07:34 AM



Eloise...simply tender...
thank you for this lovely...

Gentle Spirit
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2 posted 2002-08-11 10:10 AM


Eloise so very beautiful and there are many among these blue pages that have shared these same feelings at one time or another I am sure.  Well done.  *s*

somebody tell me, please help me....
understand.......(as sung by Trace Adkins)

{on the wings of words are spirits fly...and our souls are free~me

Enchantress
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3 posted 2002-08-11 10:16 AM


How very very beautiful!
~Hugs~

~Somewhere in my heart I'm always
dancing with you in the summer rain~

sigheyes
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4 posted 2002-08-11 10:36 AM


Lovely!
Neeraja
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5 posted 2002-08-11 02:23 PM


As if it is written for me and my artist... sigh...

Beautiful poem Eloise!!!

Neeraja

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6 posted 2002-08-11 06:48 PM


Eloise~
To have you come by is delightful ....
to have you *gift* us with such tender beauty doubles the treat~

Lovely sweet lady~
*Hugs*
~*Marge*~


~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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7 posted 2002-08-11 07:02 PM




(smiles) Awwwwwwww, this is soooooo beautiful, sweet friend, this brought a tear to my eye because this reminded me of my far-distance love Joanna and how I dream so so much of loving here and making her mine! (sigh) This is gorgeous, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Eloise, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

Suetang
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8 posted 2002-08-11 07:15 PM


Such stunning and beautiful images you have given us here Eloise.

Take care.....Sue

I am in motion
I am blue
Love is an ocean
I'm anchored in you
- Shawn Mullins

Eloise
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9 posted 2002-08-11 09:24 PM


Thank you to each of you for stopping by and reading. I don't get by to post as often as I would like, but I do stop in more often to read some wonderful posts.
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