Open Poetry #21 |
His Kiss |
WhiteRose Member Elite
since 2002-07-23
Posts 3208somebody's dungeon |
His kiss on my lips oh the feel his fingertips gently glide across my skin then to love I must give in to the passion that consumes burning hot to commune no words hushed sighs sweet love breathless am I. WhiteRose In truth, what defines us is our poetry. |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
(smiles) Awwwwwwww, this is soooooo beautiful, sweet friend, this had me daydreaming of my Joanna and dreaming of kissing her for the first time so much! This is gorgeous, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Anne, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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the_loner_23 Member Ascendant
since 2002-06-08
Posts 5479Jacksonville, Florida, USA |
Beautiful |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
This sounds wonderful! ~Hugs~ |
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Goodknight Member Elite
since 2002-06-15
Posts 2386Ohio, USA |
left me breathless - loved this - Paul |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
Wonderful panting rhythm down this page. Great job. ThisDiamond |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
This sounds like a big sigh of love.....well written. *s* somebody tell me, please help me.... |
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