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WhiteRose
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somebody's dungeon

0 posted 2002-08-10 05:55 PM



His kiss
on my lips
oh the feel
his fingertips
gently glide
across my skin
then to love
I must give in
to the passion
that consumes
burning hot
to commune
no words
hushed sighs
sweet love
breathless am I.

WhiteRose

In truth, what defines us is our poetry.

© Copyright 2002 Anne Thompson - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 2002-08-10 07:33 PM




(smiles) Awwwwwwww, this is soooooo beautiful, sweet friend, this had me daydreaming of my Joanna and dreaming of kissing her for the first time so much! This is gorgeous, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Anne, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

the_loner_23
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2 posted 2002-08-10 07:35 PM


Beautiful
Enchantress
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Canada eh.
3 posted 2002-08-10 08:02 PM


This sounds wonderful!
~Hugs~

Goodknight
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4 posted 2002-08-10 08:32 PM


left me breathless - loved this - Paul
ThisDiamond
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5 posted 2002-08-10 09:29 PM


Wonderful panting rhythm down this page.
Great job. ThisDiamond

Gentle Spirit
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6 posted 2002-08-10 10:04 PM


This sounds like a big sigh of love.....well  written.  *s*

somebody tell me, please help me....
understand.......(as sung by Trace Adkins)

{on the wings of words are spirits fly...and our souls are free~me

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