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Let me think for a while...............
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Let me think for a while............... |
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secretlife Member
since 2002-07-30
Posts 359Grean Earth ,,, |
Thinking for a while....So far Finding a new topic for my poems.... Choosing the great words that can explian my emotions.... Leave me here alone....At this time Trying to find the sentences about my life... Holding the pen...ready to write But I can't catch the great words from my mind.. Thinking about new words of my situation.... New words that can change my mood... Still thinking and thinking to build new poems of my own... Waiting for the best sentences to come... In the cold, dark, and quite room.... With my pen, papers, and my shadow... My eyes started sleeping to move from this situation.... start dreaming about finding new sentences that describe my day.... Secretlife, (Easy come,,Easy go) |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Hello Secretlife...one comment I would make, and it's only because it really makes things look better, is to watch your spelling. Typos are easy...if you are typing directly in the subject window, I wold suggest working in another program [like Word] then copy and paste your work. That way, you can easily do a spell check... As for your theme itself...when this happens to me, and my muse doesn't want to play with my pen, I get a great deal of enjoyment in reading and responding to others' poetry. That way...heh...my muse gets jealous and exacts a great revenge by NOT leaving for weeks at a time! Try it, you'll like it!  |
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secretlife Member
since 2002-07-30
Posts 359Grean Earth ,,, |
hiy dear Sunshine, thanx for your comment I will do what u have told me,,u know I am trying my best to improve my spelling,, you are right.. and I will try to do that,,, thanx alot dear friend.. Secretlife, (Easy come,,Easy go) |
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Night Shadow Junior Member
since 2002-08-04
Posts 41 |
nice new words, u know secret you are that sensetive dreamy girl. I liked that part: Waiting....With my pen, papers, and my shadow... cuz it contain my name (Night Shadow  hope u the best, Night Shadow |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (smiles) They say a single picture has thousands of words, just as the sentences that describe your day are bound to have so much more! (kiss on cheek) This is excellent, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet friend, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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secretlife Member
since 2002-07-30
Posts 359Grean Earth ,,, |
Hiy dear Night Shadow,, as always you read my poems I am happy to see that...Thanx very much for ur support my dear friend.. about the part u like yes your right I didnt see that but now I saw it and I loughed coz I didnt know...Iam happy that u like it.. Huges And you Mistletoe Angel,, U too u always support me and Iam happy for that guyes..We love u too dear friend..u know u have a sweet heart too.. thanx alot. Secretlife, (Easy come,,Easy go) |
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