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WhileIWasGone Member
since 2002-07-18
Posts 486
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Love in two acts and two letters Prologue He says to her with the emerald eyes "I love you forever and a day" and then he kisses She replies to him with toussled hair "I miss you all the day and forever" and she kisses Letter to Her It rains almost every night and I watch the lightening flash in my mirror I can`t help but think of you every night and imagine you tossing your hair in my mirror and my heart catches the rain as it falls from my eyes. Letter to Him I feel in my very being so dry parched and needing the rain that I will find once again in your presence. an over flowing flood from raindrops fallen from heaven instantly refreshing my soul Epilogue Says She to Him with toussled hair "I love you and now my being is refreshed" and She kisses away the rain He replies to Her with emerald eyes "I miss you and again I am made whole" and his kisses quench |
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LilTai Member
since 2002-06-08
Posts 189United States |
I LOVE this!!!! Beautiful, what a wonderful picture of love... Tai |
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Goodknight Member Elite
since 2002-06-15
Posts 2386Ohio, USA |
a lovely poem about love - how wonderful are the images yuou offer to us with the great poem - thanks - Paul |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
"Says She to Him with toussled hair "I love you and now my being is refreshed" and She kisses away the rain He replies to Her with emerald eyes "I miss you and again I am made whole" and his kisses quench"   (smiles) Awwwwwwww...ooohhhhh...this is sooooooo romantic, sweet friend, I LOVE IT, oh my gosh, I think you are the best at writing love in a two-person perspective! (kiss on cheek) This is breathtaking, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet friend, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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wranx Member Elite
since 2002-06-07
Posts 3689Moved from a shack to a barn |
DeaDi How did I miss this lovely piece? Because you are so doggone prolific, that I can't keep up! I'll try though. ~wranx The shortest distance between two points... |
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Madame Chipmunk Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-05
Posts 8296Michigan |
This is a gorgeous piece of writing, Dea... I love the way love looks through your pen.  ~ hugs from a striped garden pestLyra |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Very nice...James |
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