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If Not For Your Love
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If Not For Your Love |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA 
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If not for your love. The passion, the fire an ever burning flame I would not be Only through your love do I exist If not for the gleam in your eyes the whispers of your voice that burning flame that touch as you said two words “I do” Had the passion not brought a union consummated by two hearts love a cell would not have been split, born I would be only a thought Thank You Dad For falling in love with her a beautiful woman my mother For, if not for You, for her I could not be, not say.. Happy Father's Day! I love you... [This message has been edited by Magnus (06-16-2002 12:09 PM).] |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (big hugggssssssss) Oh Barry, this is sooooo beautiful, sweet friend, I have missed you and your wonderful words so so much, this past week I was in southern Califoria and I visited San Diego up through Los Angeles! (smiles) I cried reading this because I just envisioned how your dad must have felt when you read this to him, from a sensitive caring and loving heart as yours! God Bless You, sweet friend, HAPPY FATHERS DAY, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Barry, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
Very cleverly delivered Magnus! I'm sure your Dad's proud of you. |
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Martie
Moderator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Barry A father best portrayed in words of love today like yours! |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Barry, this is wonderfully penned. You just know I love it! You poet sir, have a wonderful Father's Day! ~Hugs~ ~Somewhere in my heart I'm always |
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Madame Chipmunk Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-05
Posts 8296Michigan |
Had the passion not brought a union consummated by two hearts love a cell would not have been split, born I would be only a thought Well I am sure glad that they fell in love, Barry...because otherwise, I wouldn't have your beautiful poetry to read.  ~ Happy Father's Day hugsLyra |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
If not for your love I would have missed some of the best poetry ever. Kethry Here in the midst of my lonely abyss, a single joy I find...your presence in my mind. Unknown |
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Toerag Member Ascendant
since 1999-07-29
Posts 5622Ala bam a |
I rote two of them luv pomes once, here's the second one....... Come to me Do not hesitate I am not funky Please be mine Let our hearts entwingle Like honeysucker Jump around me Scuff my boots Finger poke at me Skippy -toe by With owl growls And Fa-la-la's Love with me All your grits As I love you Love poem number two... |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Magnus, A novel way to write it but very well done. |
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TeaBag Junior Member
since 2002-06-13
Posts 10Land of Love |
This was wonderful. I am sure your dad loved it when he heard it.. who could not. It was a beautiful display of love and affection for family.. -T |
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Soleil Noir Senior Member
since 2001-12-19
Posts 688USA |
Barry...exactly! One reason I love to read men's poetry is because it gives us the wherewithal to know their minds... [This message has been edited by Soleil Noir (06-17-2002 11:47 AM).] |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
Magnus darling heart, this is utterly utterly delightful. Really lovely absolutely wonderful writing, as always you delight when you write, and when you write with love and thought you shine even brighter than normal. I tried several times to respond to this last night but I was having a little connectivity problem. I tried when I got back from dinner with Krissy, which was great fun, but I wished I’d been able to post the reply I’d written then. If fairly sparkled with wit and delight, hopefully you’ll forgive me for this one that doesn’t sparkle but does say I love this utterly utterly utterly   Love and warm stuff As always Mushy Breathe through the heat of our desire |
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