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WhiteRose
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0 posted 2002-08-09 11:04 AM


With love the sun fills the sky
light in colors for the eye
enough, enough I boldly cry
no more love before I die.

Take from me this vision sweet
before again our words do meet.
Leave me whole, at least complete
take not from me my heart that beats.

Keep in time my passion prose
don't watch the death of the rose.
Shattered dreams, forever woes
this she lives, for this she knows.

WhiteRose
(shadowed for a time)


There are a million messages,
in a million bottles,
you just have to know
which one to pull out of the ocean.

[This message has been edited by WhiteRose (08-09-2002 11:25 AM).]

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1 posted 2002-08-09 04:49 PM


sadness in separation. . . but yet. . . the shadows. . .

well done. . . doesn't need to be here on page 2. . .

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2 posted 2002-08-09 06:16 PM


~Could hear the roar of this and I enjoyed listening to it. Well done here. *Peace.

[This message has been edited by Alicia (08-09-2002 06:16 PM).]

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3 posted 2002-08-09 07:27 PM


this is another wonderful poem - you write love so well and with so much feeling - I really enjoyed reading this - Paul
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4 posted 2002-08-09 07:29 PM




(big hugggsssssss) Oh Anne, this is so very sad, sweet friend, my heart goes out to you and I hope this seperation doesn't relate to your heart, this is wonderful, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Anne, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

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