Open Poetry #21 |
With Love |
WhiteRose Member Elite
since 2002-07-23
Posts 3208somebody's dungeon |
With love the sun fills the sky light in colors for the eye enough, enough I boldly cry no more love before I die. Take from me this vision sweet before again our words do meet. Leave me whole, at least complete take not from me my heart that beats. Keep in time my passion prose don't watch the death of the rose. Shattered dreams, forever woes this she lives, for this she knows. WhiteRose (shadowed for a time) There are a million messages, in a million bottles, you just have to know which one to pull out of the ocean. [This message has been edited by WhiteRose (08-09-2002 11:25 AM).] |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
sadness in separation. . . but yet. . . the shadows. . . well done. . . doesn't need to be here on page 2. . . --------------------------------------------------------- To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world. |
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Alicia Member
since 2002-03-22
Posts 279 |
~Could hear the roar of this and I enjoyed listening to it. Well done here. *Peace. [This message has been edited by Alicia (08-09-2002 06:16 PM).] |
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Goodknight Member Elite
since 2002-06-15
Posts 2386Ohio, USA |
this is another wonderful poem - you write love so well and with so much feeling - I really enjoyed reading this - Paul |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
(big hugggsssssss) Oh Anne, this is so very sad, sweet friend, my heart goes out to you and I hope this seperation doesn't relate to your heart, this is wonderful, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Anne, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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