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Dark Stranger
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since 2001-03-19

Posts 13631
West Coast

0 posted 2002-08-09 09:21 AM

you danced my eyes
as sky legged sin
with whispers you took
my virgin places
and decorated them soul soaked
with your mouth perfume

I was friend child born
and your womb sighed
that love owned more colors
than dark edges with eyes
or hands in gloves
and you would know it when

I sipped your pout words
and let them water my beard
you said I was pretty man hearted
when I wore your eye water
you wore dressless with shoes smile
and my face side was your amulet

we made valentines in august
with your pale shirt and buttons
you made me lap chair hungry
when you rocked on my toes
and kissed my mouth quiet
with slick candy fingers

when you were woman back walking
© dark

Lady In White

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since 2001-02-12

Posts 2799
USA

1 posted 2002-08-09 09:25 AM

I hear the sighing now...
Friday morning memories
anew

wranx
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since 2002-06-07

Posts 3689
Moved from a shack to a barn

2 posted 2002-08-09 09:37 AM

Yegods, but that was lovely! As always, I stand in awe before your pen, Sir.

I married a cage dancer once, but she was more woman back talking!

~wranx

The shortest distance between two points...
is sometimes, intolerable.

Bukowski

Dark Stranger
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since 2001-03-19

Posts 13631
West Coast

3 posted 2002-08-09 09:38 AM

ms whyte, you bring pleasure to my eyes
with your replies.
sir wranx, am humbled by your review sire, thanks to you.

Martie

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since 1999-09-21

Posts 28049
California

4 posted 2002-08-09 10:03 AM

DS

Sometimes walking backwards makes beautiful poetry....reflecting words like this.

WhiteRose
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since 2002-07-23

Posts 3208
somebody's dungeon

5 posted 2002-08-09 10:32 AM

Simply devine.

There are a million messages,
in a million bottles,
you just have to know
which one to pull out of the ocean.

Dark Stranger
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since 2001-03-19

Posts 13631
West Coast

6 posted 2002-08-09 10:49 AM

ms martie, thanks lil neighbor, yes coming back or walking backwards is a return to what was before..with comfort.

ms rose, thanks to you so much for your soft touch whispers.

Enchantress
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since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

7 posted 2002-08-09 10:56 AM

Oh yes...remarkable write...
a 'sigh' just waiting to happen here Dark.
~slow morning hugs~

~Somewhere in my heart I'm always
dancing with you in the summer rain~

Dark Stranger
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since 2001-03-19

Posts 13631
West Coast

8 posted 2002-08-09 11:04 AM

ms E...you just bring that sigh over and let me hug it out of you....thanks babe for your sweet reads.

rwood
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since 2000-02-29

Posts 3793
Tennessee

9 posted 2002-08-09 02:12 PM

I was friend child born
and your womb sighed
that love owned more colors
than dark edges with eyes
or hands in gloves
and you would know it when

So meaningful...I can't begin to touch on the delicate images marked by strong emotion and sincerity. This really hits me in the most innocent way D. Yet everything woven within is purely you..purely seductive.. Hug you hard and keep you.

Sincerely,
Reg

[This message has been edited by rwood (08-09-2002 02:12 PM).]

Indigo
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since 2001-05-17

Posts 602

10 posted 2002-08-09 02:23 PM

when lace-edged silence
gatheres in your good fortune
with sky-legged strides

Indigo

Dark Stranger
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since 2001-03-19

Posts 13631
West Coast

11 posted 2002-08-09 02:25 PM

regina
keep me babe, and the thoughts you feel now,
freeze this moment as I will, in my cherish mountain secret place. thanks to you.
indigo
when the sky is legs
running to mountain dance
my eyes wear smile fortunes

thanks lady friend for your mind sides.

[This message has been edited by Dark Stranger (08-09-2002 02:27 PM).]

Mistletoe Angel

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since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

12 posted 2002-08-09 07:05 PM

"we made valentines in august
with your pale shirt and buttons
you made me lap chair hungry
when you rocked on my toes
and kissed my mouth quiet
with slick candy fingers"

(smiles) Awwwwwww, if there is Christmas In July there is no reason why not to have Valentines in August too, I LOVE IT!!! (big huggsssss) This is beautiful, sweet friend, I love it, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet friend, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

Goodknight
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since 2002-06-15

Posts 2386
Ohio, USA

13 posted 2002-08-09 07:08 PM

DS - another wonderful write - I enjoyed the trip here - great poetry - Paul

passing shadows
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displaced

14 posted 2004-04-04 08:37 PM

how did I miss these ones written long ago?

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