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To Sir, with Affection
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To Sir, with Affection |
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Soleil Noir Senior Member
since 2001-12-19
Posts 688USA |
To Sir, with Affection true honesty... is an answer to the question when you asked, what it was I would need… to see in one man the look that he has found everything in me... knowing it goes beyond trust... you asked, what would faze me that would be to see in one man that he could live with, or without me, but that he chose me above all others that he would know enough to treasure every day for the gifts that they are... together... that he would want as much as I… to impart no less than total acceptance… no matter what mistakes might occur... you asked, what could I go without… harsh words... what I couldn’t do without, being mindful of sensitivities and here you are, asking questions of my mind, now that you have made me tear up in thinking about what it would take to make me glaze over.... and you have made my chest pull in tight, knowing what I am lacking now... it goes beyond, and encompasses fully all those thoughts you think you have places them in proper shadows where there is never fear... but total love... that sir, would be the beginning of the glazing... and you, Sir, you are the first man ever to ask in such a way that I have found within me what it means to go beyond the lines... because this feeling that must be met... would take me to the sheets, willingly... and right now... I feel very, very empty... but so very pleased, and honored, that you cared enough to ask... and to tell you, you have affected me with your affection |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
Loved the last bit, It rounded off a perfect piece. Kethry Here in the midst of my lonely abyss, a single joy I find...your presence in my mind. Unknown |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
ms noir, this is a lovely view can hear the soundtrack to sir with love playing in the background lovely work ms |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
In the art of chivalry and the day of noble knights....there stood a man, tall, of great honor and truth. Within this man, a heart...large as the kingdom itself, beat silently within a chest covered in silver mail, the mantle worn gallantly. Desiring only that he be given but the chance to say, I care.... I would hope that such a man exists for this lady of the realm.... |
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Martie
Moderator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Soleil It only takes one word, to change the way a heart feels; one deed to change the world. |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
Soleil Noir - touching your words of what's in your heart. Lovely they are, with honesty... I commend you... BC |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
What Magnus said... plus I am speecheless... for every woman who wants and needs and deserves to feel cherished. ~Hugs~ |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
"and right now... I feel very, very empty... but so very pleased, and honored, that you cared enough to ask... and to tell you, you have affected me with your affection"   (smiles) Oh Soleil, this is sooooooo beautiful, I believe for a woman to feel special is the feeling every woman deserves to feel who is special herself! (sigh) This is breathtaking, sweet friend, I love it, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Soleil, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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Bridget Shenachie Senior Member
since 2002-01-23
Posts 1056Kansas USA |
Dear Soleil Noir, This is a beautiful verse and I wish you the more true affection and sensitivity and an end of harsh words. Shenachie |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
Sounds like your needs are the expectations of anyone truly loved and in love Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write. |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
more and more I'm finding that your voice is coming from a place that's new. . . excellent work. . . -------------------------------------------------------- To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world. |
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