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Interloper
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Deep in the heart

0 posted 2002-08-08 12:28 PM


let me search your heart
I will kindle fires within
dissipating gloom

Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write.

© Copyright 2002 The Tall Texan aka Doctor Love - All Rights Reserved
Sunshine
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1 posted 2002-08-08 12:38 PM



It is SO good seeing you back
in the blue [pages]...
these are promises...

ThisDiamond
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2 posted 2002-08-08 12:43 PM


A capsule of liquid gold.
Greetings and bravo. ThisDiamond

Jason
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3 posted 2002-08-08 12:45 PM


Interlopoer,

I really like good ones(what are these called?)and this is a very good one.
It's a beautiful thought too, well done.

Jason

[This message has been edited by Jason (08-08-2002 12:45 PM).]

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4 posted 2002-08-08 12:49 PM


sunshine breaks the clouds
every time love comes to town
an angels picnic

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

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5 posted 2002-08-08 12:50 PM


Sunshine ~
Gee, thanks, shiney one

ThisDiamond ~
I think your first time to visit my work.  Thanks for your time and wonderful reply

Jason ~
I think your first time, too.  This form is called a Senryu.  Probably "American" Senryu.
Thanks for the 1derful comment

Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write.

Interloper
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6 posted 2002-08-08 12:51 PM


Noah ~
I almost missed you.  What a fine reply, my friend.  Thank you

Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write.

Madame Chipmunk
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7 posted 2002-08-08 12:56 PM


I love the way you can write such deep thoughts with so few words, Interloper...
I think that is a sign of genius

~ lots of chipmunk hugs

Lyra

copyright2002 Lyra Nesius

"poetry is life distilled"  Gwendolyn Brooks

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8 posted 2002-08-08 12:58 PM


Bob darling heart I hope the tall Texan realises that he is the best Texan poet around. Well if you don’t you should doThe way you spin words into wonder is always perfect and sometimes on days when the day seems particularly drab you are a positive shower of light and magic.

Wonderful writing. It flows beautifully across the page like a sweep of rainbow hue.
And again you fly my mind into a place where dreams are sprinkled with starlight and moonlight is reflected back inside dreamer’s song YOU of course KNOW I adore this don’t you, or do I have to tell you so? Okay if I must I must I love it utterly utterly. This is utterly utterly perfect


Love and warm stuff
As always
Mushy

Breathe through the heat of our desire
Thy coolness and they balm
Let sense be dumb let flesh retire
Speak through the earthquake wind and fire

1slick_lady
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9 posted 2002-08-08 01:23 PM


darkness can not hide
inspiration of passion
when you say my name

Interloper
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Deep in the heart
10 posted 2002-08-09 10:40 AM


Lyra ~
Not all signs are correct   I think I've found a way to counterfeit at least one
Your kind approbation is humbling.

Marvelous one ~
You seem intent on my never being able to wear a Stetson or Resistol again

Helen ~
Helen, Helen, Helen

Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write.

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