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vandana
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0 posted 2002-08-08 11:07 AM



The blue sky with clouds
Dark clouds surrunders with rain
Pouring rain with clouds

[This message has been edited by vandana (08-08-2002 04:12 PM).]

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Nan
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1 posted 2002-08-08 11:38 AM


This is a very inspirational write, vandana..

Rain drops from gray clouds
Lightning bolts reach for the ground
Thundrous day ahead



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2 posted 2002-08-08 11:49 AM


Beautiful! I love to look at the blue sky. Watching all of the birds fly by.
nakdthoughts
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3 posted 2002-08-08 11:58 AM


Yes, I love the thoughts inspired by you,
yesterday while driving I though I saw a whale swimming in the afternoon sky.
Clouds form carpet, soft
Thoughts settle in for the day
Drifting aimlessly

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4 posted 2002-08-08 12:16 PM


Very lovely....

Blue skies painting soft
Lullabies of summer nights
Dew drops fall like rain

inspired...


Lauren~

The ocean looks like a thousand diamonds strewn across a blue blanket
I lean against the wind pretend I am weightless and in this moment I am happy

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5 posted 2002-08-08 12:19 PM




azure skies beckon
with rainbow rain of heaven
painting a loves face


"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

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6 posted 2002-08-08 03:44 PM


great job my friend. . . so nice to see you growing every day. . .



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