Open Poetry #21 |
Slumbering Reflections |
WhiteRose Member Elite
since 2002-07-23
Posts 3208somebody's dungeon |
I've seen slumbering reflections in the spring as it rests. The water still for a moment all images frozen in time sharpley glistening in the afternoon glare. A gentle repose of life captured in an instant as the running water rests, saves the picture then continues on. WhiteRose |
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VAS Member Rara Avis
since 2000-11-16
Posts 7450Oregon |
fascinating this held my mind frozen, for a moment, trying to capture the essence of this mesmerizing thought of a spring pausing for a moment in time Whether on the shoal or on the shore, |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
(smiles) Awwwwwww, I love this, sweet friend, this is wonderful, I imagined a flowing stream and the sweet solitude of a girl sitting beside it, this is lovely, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Anne, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
This is fabulous! Write on, please! Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write. |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
oh yes..you wrap it and unwrap it in the same sitting, enjoyed it ms |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
WhiteRose~ I do like this ... sort of what I call my Thought-O-Graphs ... poetic lens captures~ Might be time for me to develop some of those again~ *Hugs* ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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Blue Kitty Member
since 2002-08-05
Posts 72Virginia |
Saves a picture, then moves on, Oh this is a beautiful phrase. Sort of like a moment in life that stays with you, sometimes even when you don’t want it to. I liked this bunches. P. |
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BloomingRose Member Elite
since 2000-08-09
Posts 3092Florida |
Great imagery! Loved the softness of this poem. Deb |
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