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MIdsummerRain Member
since 2002-05-19
Posts 175St. Louis, Missouri |
Broken Make Me Lose my Will Come on, Make Me Burn Beg for Me to come Undone Make Me Stay for You in Return Ahhhh make it Ecstacy She'll be Merely Envoius, Love Come, just Dance for Me Once Bring Me Rapture to Write of Save My Foolish Reflections Beneath your Wanderings Succumb to Me, Love & I'll Hide Beneath your Wings I'll not Bleed for You ,Love Tho, I'll Plead for You to Her Must I Jest with You, Love This is Not what I'd Prefer So, then make your Choice I Wish to Wait for No One All of This will Finish Me For It seems with Her, Im Outdone One day Men will look back & say |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
very intense poem, Kethry Here in the midst of my lonely abyss, a single joy I find...your presence in my mind. Unknown |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
The way you have laid this out in format makes every line a title of its own making... well done! |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (big hugggssssss) Awwwww, I hope these thoughts are fictional to your own heart, sweet friend, this is sadly beautiful, yay, I agree too that every line can be its own title, I love it, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiufl heart, sweet Rayne thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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MIdsummerRain Member
since 2002-05-19
Posts 175St. Louis, Missouri |
Kethry ~ Thank you for you words of Compassion, my friend Sunshine ~ Your words Humble me MistletoeAngel Inspiring as always Sweet Noah ~Rayne One day Men will look back & say that I gave birth to the 20th Century Jack the Ripper ~1888 [This message has been edited by MIdsummerRain (08-09-2002 02:17 AM).] |
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