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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla 
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Warning Reticulate or fix the stake This misanthrope would fix a wake He is the wind now moves the swell And the movement leads straight to hell. The larger mass must stop and think We sit upon the very brink. Apocalypse is set to ride There is no place for us to hide. It’s now or never stand up tall Hear and see the signs that call It leaps in every wave of light The reapers blade that sweeps the night If not for now then future time Ring those bells of warnings chime. We must revolt with timely speed The time is now with jolt and deed. And if you cannot leave your nest Than God will grant you do your best. |
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Kit McCallum
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Member Laureate
since 2000-04-30
Posts 14774Ontario, Canada |
What a beautiful piece to start my morning Sy ... filled with wisdom and in-depth thought. Much appreciated this.  Best wishes, /Kit |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
Seymour darling heart this is exceptional, it truly is one of your deeper meaning ones that call on the human race to take stock of what is we are doing to Mother Earth. Whenever you raise the banner of awareness, I’m forced to re-evaluate the meaning of life. This is exceptional writing as always your writing is so very very special and I love it utterly. You know when I do eventually get in here I run as fast as my little fingers can carry me to your poem, where in contentment I sit myself down at the feet of the master and gaze in wonder at you. drinking in the sparkling air that is finer, and more rarefied around you than almost anywhere else. What I’m trying to say and taking far too long about it is I love your writing. This is another of your utter delights and I love it utterly utterly utterly. as always Mushy   Breathe through the heat of our desire |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Kit, It's always a delight to have you read and comment on my humble work.  Marsha, My delight of the east, so nice to see your replies once again, they are addictive you know. |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Morning Sy! You are such a joy to read first thing in the morning... with my first cuppa! Love this piece... ~Morning hugs~ ~Somewhere in my heart I'm always |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Enchantress You are such a joy to have as a reader. |
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Rex Allen McCoy Member Elite
since 2000-01-30
Posts 2863Sippin a Timmy's in London |
You know how to make one sit up and take notice, Seymour ... some excellent thinking here |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Rex, I hope so, thank you friend. |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Sy...I try my best most every day e'en though by end I'm frayed for it seems on air to float that others think to get my goat but I'll persist, I know I will as I lean on windowsill and hear the words that poets speak that for the better, I shall seek so let me walk beside the you that holds the fantasy I would view |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
What would I do without my sunshine. |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
Reticulate or fix the stake This misanthrope would fix a wake He is the wind now moves the swell And the movement leads straight to hell. The larger mass must stop and think We sit upon the very brink. Apocalypse is set to ride There is no place for us to hide. ================================= And if you cannot leave your nest Than God will grant you do your best. =================================== All warnings should be so poetically poignant and so clever of vocabulary and cadence. That first verse stands alone in its impact, imagery and intend...very cool penning me Stinkylove. You keep writing like this and Mother Nature is gonna fall for ya like Tinkerbell did  *ww*   If all the tear drops went to heaven |
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rwood Member Elite
since 2000-02-29
Posts 3793Tennessee |
Hmmm..the times and the signs..please keep me poetically posted Sy in case I forget the art of life. It's in the heart isn't it? Hug smiles. Sincerely, Reg |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
keeping everyone aware. . . yes, we need to be. . . well done Sir. . . ---------------------------------------------------------- To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world. |
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Nan
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191Cape Cod Massachusetts USA |
Doing my best here... From Sharon's nest though.. Kewl write, dear Sy... |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Such a message, masterfully crafted with your pen of gold...from the hand of God.. Well said Sy.... |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
JM, Love the ending sentence, WWRS rwood, I'll do just that, hugs back. Thank you Sven. Magnus, Thank you my friend. Nan, I have no worries about you. |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
Wow!!! I always love reading the powerful thoughts in your writing, sweet friend, it seems you always have something special up your sleeve everyday to read, I LOVE IT, this is wonderful, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Seymour, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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Martie
Moderator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Sy To think, to dream, to remember, to learn...we see all these things, captured with your wisdom in poetry. Thank you. |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Noah my friend, thank you. Martie, Always a pleasure to read your replies. |
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Madame Chipmunk Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-05
Posts 8296Michigan |
If not for now then future time Ring those bells of warnings chime. We must revolt with timely speed The time is now with jolt and deed. What an exquisite warning, Sy... so perfectly true so perfectly written Our environment is fast becoming an endangered ecosystem.  ~ hugs from an endangered rodentLyra |
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ecrivan Member Elite
since 2001-12-10
Posts 3923my own state |
much wisdom here Sy..enjoyed the read  |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Lyra, Hugs back to a loving rodent. ecrivan, Thank you my friend. |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
Every time I think I've surely seen your best, you crank it up a few notches. *S* This is superb, Seymour! |
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Jason Member
since 2002-07-31
Posts 72Macon, GA |
Seymour, Sir, This is the drink to fill my cup! A perfect way to wake my mind up. Thank You Sir, Jason Practiced in the Art of Perception |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Suthern, Jason, Thank you my friend. |
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