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RSWells
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since 2001-06-17

Posts 2533

0 posted 2002-08-07 12:36 PM

Fear begins
it's power
like min-
utes do a day,
Tears spin
into showers
like april in-
to may,
Dear you skin,
devour
a heart as
though it's prey
and what's
left of me
will cower
like a flower
under hay,
yes the hour
that I towered
fell like bowers
in your sway,
you snowplower
Love has soured
what was our's
is gone away,

Years like sin
I'll coward
from the call
of passion's play

"Happy people have no history" - French Proverb

Sunshine

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since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

1 posted 2002-08-07 08:48 AM

Nah, that's just the whiplash effect...
it will all even out...
and like you, I'll promise...

Seymour Tabin
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since 1999-07-07

Posts 31720
Tamarac Fla

2 posted 2002-08-07 08:56 AM

RSWells
A good weave, I enjoyed the read.

Alicia
Member

since 2002-03-22

Posts 279

3 posted 2002-08-07 09:44 AM

~Crafty, and remaining here now. What a title! *Peace.

serenity blaze
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since 2000-02-02

Posts 27738

4 posted 2002-08-07 12:24 PM

first I had to truly admire the construct of this--as though you'd built a tower starting at the TOP...the message of the work breaks my heart tho. Quite an impact--alliterative title, lots of assonance internal rhyme and rhythmic spin to this. very nice work here

RSWells
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since 2001-06-17

Posts 2533

5 posted 2002-08-07 12:47 PM

Thank you for your replies on this strange (for me) write. I did try to incorporate humor into a bad situation. I am ready to let it go. I must.

VAS
Member Rara Avis

since 2000-11-16

Posts 7450
Oregon

6 posted 2002-08-07 01:05 PM

Please, I wish to echo serenity blaze and wish to add that I will stand in agreement of your additional comment.

It is something we all must find a way to do.

Whether on the shoal or on the shore,
I'll seek the lighthouse evermore.

Enchantress
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since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

7 posted 2002-08-07 03:49 PM

Let it go Richard...just let it go.
Excellent write.
~HUGS~

~Somewhere in my heart I'm always
dancing with you in the summer rain~

Sven

Member Laureate

since 1999-11-23

Posts 14937
East Lansing, MI USA

8 posted 2002-08-07 04:13 PM

like the flow of this Sir. . . just like falling down that tower, wouldn't you say??

well done. . .

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Mysteria

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since 2001-03-07

Posts 18328
British Columbia, Canada

9 posted 2002-08-07 05:04 PM

Some towers fall to be built again, and are all the stronger..."Il prend la force a laissé aller, soit fort"...but, this was a really unusually "neat" poem Richard.

Nothing means more to me than faith,
family and my friends.

Proud Ca

RSWells
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since 2001-06-17

Posts 2533

10 posted 2002-08-07 06:49 PM

Je suis seulement amour fort pourrais me renverser.

"Happy people have no history" - French Proverb

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