Open Poetry #21 |
AnnaLee's Tale |
Elan Member
since 2002-05-03
Posts 382State of Wide Eye |
AnnaLee’s Tale "Whisper with me" Among ebbing tides The roar will come Soon enough ~ "Flow with me" Where sunlight hides The shore, her home, When times are rough Sands gone white Along the shore Seashells gold All mystery Stars are bright A diamond’s store Where stories hold Sweet AnnaLee She is trim, there, In the mist A vision lovely Sweet AnnaLee Hand to brim, fair, To be kissed A lovely being Is she to me The moonlight heightens Then sinks from sight Soft talk ebbs and flows Soon sunlight brightens This lonesome shore Soft talk ebbs and flows Some one day She’ll walk with me My true and lovely Sweet AnnaLee Some might say She’ll talk to me The mysterious Sweet AnnaLee |
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Blue Kitty Member
since 2002-08-05
Posts 72Virginia |
this is so beautiful and the picture goes so well too. I love the beaches, but I’m used to the more sandy ones than the one you have in the picture. Rocky shores are nice too, to hop across the pulsing tide. P. |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
(smiles) Awwwwwww, I love the sensitive feel of this, sweet friend, and I know if you believe in it you will be with AnnaLee again! (big hugggssssss) This is touching, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Elan, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
ms E, she is lovely can see her there and even sir poe in distant with his looking glass in admire |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
Sands gone white Along the shore Seashells gold All mystery Stars are bright A diamond's store Where stories hold Sweet AnnaLee She is trim, there, In the mist A vision lovely Sweet AnnaLee Hand to brim, fair, To be kissed A lovely being Is she to me The moonlight heightens Then sinks from sight Soft talk ebbs and flows Soon sunlight brightens This lonesome shore Soft talk ebbs and flows =============================== Elan..this is an elegant inspire...as are all of your writes. The imagery in this is wonderful and the theme is timeless. Lovely lovely poetess E. |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Elan~This is penned in a whisper... very lovely and mysterious. Great imagery. Love it, I do!! ~Hugs~ |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
I think Poe would have been smiling if he had read this poem....of his AnnaLee... |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Enjoyed...James |
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