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Elan
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0 posted 2002-08-06 01:58 PM




AnnaLee’s Tale

"Whisper with me"
Among ebbing tides
The roar will come
Soon enough ~
"Flow with me"
Where sunlight hides
The shore, her home,
When times are rough

Sands gone white
Along the shore
Seashells gold
All mystery
Stars are bright
A diamond’s store
Where stories hold
Sweet AnnaLee

She is trim, there,
In the mist
A vision lovely
Sweet AnnaLee
Hand to brim, fair,
To be kissed
A lovely being
Is she to me

The moonlight heightens
Then sinks from sight
Soft talk ebbs and flows

Soon sunlight brightens
This lonesome shore
Soft talk ebbs and flows

Some one day
She’ll walk with me
My true and lovely
Sweet AnnaLee
Some might say
She’ll talk to me
The mysterious
Sweet AnnaLee


© Copyright 2002 Elan - All Rights Reserved
Blue Kitty
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1 posted 2002-08-06 02:03 PM


this is so beautiful and the picture goes so well too.  I love the beaches, but I’m used to the more sandy ones than the one you have in the picture.  Rocky shores are nice too, to hop across the pulsing tide.

P.

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2 posted 2002-08-06 02:09 PM




(smiles) Awwwwwww, I love the sensitive feel of this, sweet friend, and I know if you believe in it you will be with AnnaLee again! (big hugggssssss) This is touching, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Elan, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

Dark Stranger
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3 posted 2002-08-06 02:11 PM


ms E, she is lovely
can see her there
and even sir poe in distant
with his looking glass in admire

Janet Marie
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4 posted 2002-08-06 02:42 PM


Sands gone white
Along the shore
Seashells gold
All mystery
Stars are bright
A diamond's store
Where stories hold
Sweet AnnaLee

She is trim, there,
In the mist
A vision lovely
Sweet AnnaLee
Hand to brim, fair,
To be kissed
A lovely being
Is she to me

The moonlight heightens
Then sinks from sight
Soft talk ebbs and flows

Soon sunlight brightens
This lonesome shore
Soft talk ebbs and flows
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Elan..this is an elegant inspire...as are all of your writes.
The imagery in this is wonderful and the theme is timeless.
Lovely lovely poetess E.



Enchantress
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5 posted 2002-08-06 04:56 PM


Elan~This is penned in a whisper...
very lovely and mysterious.
Great imagery.
Love it, I do!!
~Hugs~

Magnus
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6 posted 2002-08-06 04:58 PM


I think Poe would have been smiling if he
had read this poem....of his AnnaLee...

JamesMichael
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7 posted 2002-08-08 05:12 AM


Enjoyed...James
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