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HopeS
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since 2000-12-22
Posts 4596
Perth Western Australia

0 posted 2002-08-06 07:51 AM



Lost Without You

My confidence
Hit an all time low
Where are the stars
Once used to glow

There up above
One special to me
I often would wish
Gave my guarantee

Carrying wishes
Brightly  glistening
I remember when
Stars were listening

Stellar messages
On a starlight trail
Heart now asking
Of reason they fail

Left in darkness
Stars losing glow
I question myself
Answers  I know

In silent despair
Heartaches grew
Black is my night
Lost without you

Hope ©2002

© Copyright 2002 HopeS - All Rights Reserved
Seymour Tabin
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since 1999-07-07
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Tamarac Fla
1 posted 2002-08-06 08:04 AM


HopeS,
Such an elegant tear, you are a delight to read.

WhiteRose
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since 2002-07-23
Posts 3208
somebody's dungeon
2 posted 2002-08-06 09:15 AM


This is lovely in all it's sadness.
Madame Chipmunk
Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-05
Posts 8296
Michigan
3 posted 2002-08-06 12:20 PM


Beautifully sad, and beautifully written, Hope.
~ hugs and tears

Lyra

copyright2002 Lyra Nesius

"poetry is life distilled"  Gwendolyn Brooks

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