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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast 
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vanilla is wing shoe flavor to little boys without dollars and to trees that don't have names nor would they answer anyone well maybe the wind who calls them all rustle except in winter I found you on e drive you were fresh painted and I knew your color eyes like the taste of my own scent but I couldn't remember your name although I had said it backward a thousand times in dreams talking backward is different than talking back you said and you were just stubborn with your inside toy dirty was ok you said but you hated stolen parts and you knew I would break yours so you put it long legged high in the tree by my window and left the leaves off just in case I didn't notice, you were wing tip bare foot when we went to the ice cream store you were vanilla in a new dress sunday and I just pretended to be chocolate.. ©Dark |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
softly smiling here Dark, I liked this one. hmmm...you sure you weren't just chocolate syrup?? *winks* Enjoy life, this is NOT a dress rehearsal. |
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rwood Member Elite
since 2000-02-29
Posts 3793Tennessee |
Two spoons spooning in dark woods dawn Footpaths winding to simple places dancing on feet top all the way vanilla swirls rich in chocolate Couldn't help myself..I love this verse. Sincerely, Reg |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
Donna...syrup...nah, was the full banana.I mean cocoa bean. Thanks hon, good morning to you. Regina, no excuse is accepted... you gotta take me home now, and see if poppa will let you keep me. (grin) thanks babe, I like your set of images. [This message has been edited by Dark Stranger (08-06-2002 09:20 AM).] |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Dark Stranger A Pucks dance of excellent taste. Enjoyed |
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WhiteRose Member Elite
since 2002-07-23
Posts 3208somebody's dungeon |
Chocolate is the flavor of royalty. Just my opinion :-) Enjoyed the poem very much. Love Seduces Joy From The Heart |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
vanilla and chocolate swirled together, what an image, what a poem! Keth Here in the midst of my lonely abyss, a single joy I find...your presence in my mind. Unknown |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
Sy, thanks sir, that is a great image of illustration. Ms Rose, thanks to you for the royal review. Kethry, slow hugs to you and your sweert tooth mind, you are a treat babe, thanks to you. [This message has been edited by Dark Stranger (08-06-2002 09:37 AM).] |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Her name is Anna.... and I'm smiling... |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
and I am smiling at this piece.. and saying, good morning Dark. ~Slow hugs~ |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
Ms Sunshine, good morning babe, coffee treats and a slow hug to you. Thanks so much for the read. Enchantress, naughty grins and slow hand hugs to you for your visit and review, thanks for always being there smiling. |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
DS So many fresh images in this, I know I won't find in any icecream store: "well maybe the wind who calls them all rustle except in winter" your pen is such a cool place! |
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Madame Chipmunk Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-05
Posts 8296Michigan |
Hey there, Dark... I happen to love chocolate......... and also vanilla. A beautifully written piece, which made me very hungry.  ~ hugs of yumLyra |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
  (smiles) Chocolate? With all then lovely words you write it always seems more to me like a mudd pie with extra sprinkles! (big hugggsssssss) This is a yummy and beautiful poem, sweet friend, you always have all the 31 flavors down, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet friend, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
ms martie, thanks to you sweet neighbor lady, can you come over and have ice cream later? big hugs to you. ms chip' thanks to you poetess, for your visit and your sweet review. noah, thanks my friend, yes mudd pie would work, maybe frozen one..... slow thawed warm. |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Dark, like keys on a piano, you play the words and the picture perfectly.... Personally, I'm a Butter Pecan freak.... Exceptional poem.... |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
*Hugs* ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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Bridget Shenachie Senior Member
since 2002-01-23
Posts 1056Kansas USA |
Hi Dark! I found these lines astounding-- you were wing tip bare foot when we went to the ice cream store you were vanilla in a new dress sunday And I enjoy being astonished by your unique style and fantastic imagery. Shenachie |
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Honeybee Member Ascendant
since 1999-12-26
Posts 5372Ontario, CANADA |
"but I couldn't remember your name although I had said it backward a thousand times in dreams you were wing tip bare foot when we went to the ice cream store you were vanilla in a new dress sunday and I just pretended to be chocolate.." ________________________________________ I LOVE those lines! DS, you have some unique images in this, and I join in the consensus, you've got me smiling here...a cool, vivid write! Take care, Melissa~ "Poetry is not an opinion expressed... |
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