Open Poetry #21 |
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Butterfly (re-posted for New England Lazurlu) |
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Madame Chipmunk Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-05
Posts 8296Michigan ![]() |
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Mistletoe Angel![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
![]() (big hugggsssssss) Oh Lyra, this is soooooo beautiful, sweet friend, every time I read this this brings a tear to my eye, this is sooooooo beautiful and flitters with the true grace of love never forgotten! (sigh) I love it, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Lyra, thank you for sharing! ![]() May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." Shakira [This message has been edited by Mistletoe Angel (08-06-2002 12:23 AM).] |
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Nan
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191Cape Cod Massachusetts USA |
Butterflies are indeed free...This is lovely, Lyra... ![]() |
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bsquirrel![]()
since 2000-01-03
Posts 7855 |
I love this poem and the story behind it! As far as I'm concerned, Lyra, you can repost this one forever (as well as yr others). ![]() ![]() Said if I only could ... |
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NewEnglandlazurlu Member Rara Avis
since 2002-01-04
Posts 7470A Mountain Paradise |
When you told me the story behind these words, I had goosebumps and now reading this and seeing the graphic brings tears to my eyes. You are one very strong lady and you will get through this latest chapter and emerge victorious. Thinking of you, Hugs, Marti |
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SimplyGold Senior Member
since 2002-07-10
Posts 1453 |
Madame Chipmunk, I'm at work now and decided to sneak a peak at your writing. Glad I did. You captured the experience as if you were there. A butterfly in disguise. I pretended to set my spirit free. |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
Madame - only you can write about a butterfly with so much passion... BC |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
...Exquisite!!... ![]() |
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Kit McCallum
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Member Laureate
since 2000-04-30
Posts 14774Ontario, Canada |
"though you are apart from us you will always be part of us" Beautiful phrasing Lyra ... a tender and thought-filled piece, much enjoyed! ![]() Best wishes, /Kit |
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Marsha![]()
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
Lyra darling heart this is utterly utterly wonderful, you have such a gift of writing beauty darling girl. The story behind this is amazing the strength of your spirit is also amazing it like you is a shaft of wonder that fills the page with your light. Truly you are an incredible writer, and this is still a beautiful poem. Do I love it you know I do, as always darling girl your writing is a delight. Wonderful simply excellent writing as always Mushy ![]() ![]() ![]() Breathe through the heat of our desire |
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Marge Tindal![]() ![]() ![]() ![]()
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Lyra~ So exquisitely lovely~ *Hugs* ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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Madame Chipmunk Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-05
Posts 8296Michigan |
Thank you so much for your sweet, understanding reply, Noah... The poem is indeed, about true love, never forgotten. ![]() Lyra |
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Madame Chipmunk Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-05
Posts 8296Michigan |
Thanks so much, Nan... You are right...butterflies are free... and they also symbolize the passing from this life into the next. ![]() Lyra |
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Madame Chipmunk Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-05
Posts 8296Michigan |
Thanks so much, Mr.Squirrel... I am glad that you enjoy the poem and I am flattered that you remember the romantic story behind it. ![]() Lyra |
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Madame Chipmunk Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-05
Posts 8296Michigan |
Thanks so much, Marti... I am glad you enjoyed the poem and I would also thank you for having so much confidence in my health... Right now, I wish I had some of that. ![]() Lyra |
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Madame Chipmunk Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-05
Posts 8296Michigan |
Thanks so much, Electra.... I am so glad that you enjoyed the poem and that it encouraged you to free your spirit. ![]() Lyra |
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Madame Chipmunk Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-05
Posts 8296Michigan |
Thank you so much, Bill. The reason that this butterfly means so much to me is that when my first husband was dying, he said that he would send me a sign that he was okay somewhere, after he died. At his burial...just as the coffin was being lowered into the grave, a big beautiful Tiger Swallowtail butterfly which looked exactly like the one in the picture...flew up out of the grave (butterflies don't ever go underground), it flew right between his sister and me...and it brushed my cheek as it flew past. I believe that this was the sign from him. He has since sent me other unmistakable signs that he is watching over me. ![]() Lyra |
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Madame Chipmunk Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-05
Posts 8296Michigan |
Thanks so much, Nancy... That is quite a compliment...coming from such a talented poetess as yourself... ![]() Lyra |
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Madame Chipmunk Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-05
Posts 8296Michigan |
Thanks so much for your reply, Kit... I'm very glad you enjoyed it. ![]() Lyra |
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Madame Chipmunk Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-05
Posts 8296Michigan |
Thanks so much for that amazing compliment, Marsha... I think I have posted and re-posted this poem about 5 times and it always seems to be enjoyed. Probably because it is about a real incident and it was written with love. This is one of the first poems I wrote after my first husband died....and I hadn't written in several years. ![]() Lyra |
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Madame Chipmunk Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-05
Posts 8296Michigan |
Thanks so much, Marge... I'm glad you enjoyed. ![]() Lyra |
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