Open Poetry #21 |
I SenSe |
cjohnson/poet2079 Junior Member
since 2002-07-31
Posts 35va(757) |
"I SenSe" is a poem from a collection called, Echoes Of The Heart. A special friend and I respond- ed to each others poems. Carolyn:I sense the presence of love, a love that fills a void...I pursue the presence of love, long awaited for...I embrace the essence of love, void of all confusion, a love that's real and true, not just an illusion... Shaheed: ...I sense a love, I claim it to be real enhancing my thought of response, some- thing that I feel; I sense your presence in everything I do, unfolding with happi- ness a love that's true... eyssence [This message has been edited by Sunshine (08-05-2002 02:45 PM).] |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Smiling at your Constructive Critique message, CJohnson...Welcome to Passions! As far as being a poem, I guess you could call a sharing of ideas framed this way, a poem. If you have any questions, please do not hesitate to contact a moderator. And, do check your E-mail for a Special Greeting! Karilea |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
cjohnson/poet2079 - nice write. Welcome to this place of poetry where people are warm and friendly... BC |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Welcome to Passions! Interesting first post! I look forward to seeing more of your work. ~Hugs, Nancy~ ~Somewhere in my heart I'm always |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
welcome to Passions! nice to have you here. |
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CSKpoet Senior Member
since 2002-07-12
Posts 845Island in Paradise |
Welcome to passions!Thanks for sharing. Looking forward to you sharing some more..and thanks for your kind words on my post. aloha, Cher Poetry is: |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
Welcome to Passions. I look forward to more of your work. Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write. |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
WOW!!! Oh my gosh, I love this, this is an original and dazzling debut, sweet friend, there is always poetry in communication and that is the miracle of it, I LOVE IT!!! Welcome to Passions, sweet friend, may you be inspired by all of us here as we will all be inspired by your lovely words! (big hugggssssss) I can't wait to read more of your lovely words, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet friend, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Carolyn~ Welcome to Passions~ *Hugs* ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
Welcome fellow poet, to the depths of the blue pages. Hope you enjoy these days as much as I have. Talent and poise... ThisDiamond |
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